Krystallic Blanket: Three Actors and Three Xs

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nodamnbrakes

nodamnbrakes #1 · Feb 12th, 2014 · 3 · 1 ·

Dark Blaze is a simple student. He is a simple pony. His life is simple. Being him is simply... boring.

Dark Blaze is a simple student.

Dark Blaze

I have nothing more to say. Nothing more need be said.

HiddenUnderACouch

HiddenUnderACouch #2 · Feb 13th, 2014 · 1 · ·

3935999 I could have made him a red and black alicorn, with mysterious powers, tragic past and make him Luna's son. So be grateful

nodamnbrakes

nodamnbrakes #3 · Feb 13th, 2014 · · ·

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Cry_Havok

Cry_Havok #5 · Feb 14th, 2014 · · ·

The protagonist, he seems a bit... overdone, but at least most of his prowess is in his own head rather than in "reality". I also love oc on oc cloppery, because nopony is vastly out of character since there is no pre-established characters to begin with. That said, I'd love to see some of all of their fantasies come crashing to the dirt, let them learn they aren't the greatest, and earn some success in their way into some of their lofty goals, with healthy amounts of humping along the way. If you feel like fleshing them out that is, else it works as a one shot.

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