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Merlin, a powerful teen-aged sorcerer, has torn the veil between his world and Equestria, strangely, right after Twilight was studying up on mythology on humans- particularly because some were said to possess immense magical power. When she meets Merlin, dressed in robes the same color as her mane, and having a necklace exactly the same as her cutie mark, not only does it start an irreplaceable relationship, but fiery secrets are revealed about Equestria's past.

AUTHORS' NOTE:
All right, I should make one thing clear before anyone starts reading this story, yes this does have some "Harry-potter"-esque themes and elements to it. I'm trying to write a story that while having some 'mystic' or 'fantastical' elements to it, will be focused more on storyline.

Also, I started this story when I just became an MLP fan. I've updated some of the chapters that had mistakes in them.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 31 )

Dude, this is going just at the right pace. Keep it up and it could turn into a really good story. :scootangel:

Ok, one question. Merlin's diary say the human Earth in date 2010 when he wrote.
So the question is, the humans in a alternative medieval universe, or this 2010 date the really 2010 with advanced technology? For example: cars, innovative guns, Godzilla size planes and aircrafts, maybe space programs and other human things.
Ok, i guess the medieval era win, but who knows? You write this story, not me.
Oh, and keep it up buddy, you have a great work here.

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The date he wrote is set in this world, just wanted to confirm that,
that is, there is modern technology. I just haven't introduced it into the storyline yet.

Wow, this has surprised me yet again. Keep it up man! :derpytongue2:

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Thank you. Have you read the other chapters?

Only one thing, for god sake Andromeda is girl name:trixieshiftright:. Rest is good so far.

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I haven't made this quite clear yet, -and for this, I apologize- but that's not actually his first name, it's his last name. I chose "Andromeda" Because, when translated, it actually means "Leader of men". Sorry for the confusion.:twilightblush:

Hm. So we now meet Achilles Andromeda... Not bad. Keep up the good work man. Even though it was a short chapter, we get a glimpse tossed what may happen next. :scootangel:

Yeah it is so much better:rainbowlaugh:. It was kinda strange but i suppose as Celestia and Luna have only one name your prince have one name only too. But i am glad i was wrong :coolphoto:

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Do you get what 'war' she was talking about? His name is the dead give-away.

Yeah i study clasicall archeology. So answer is yes i also understand why he was so upset after dead of his cousin. But what i didnt understand is what the hell doing Celestia and Luna in Troy war ?! Why they help greek ? Or why they want the fight Troy in first place. And if is Arthur bad so Morgana and Mordred are good ?!

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I never said Arthur became evil, oh, and since you mentioned "Morgana", let me say something: this isn't actually a crossover between bbc's Merlin, also, you'll figure out why she sent them to the war in troy later.
PS: Morgan (again, not from bbc) does appear in this story, but she isn't evil in the sense of the word; she's more arrogant, boasting about her powers constantly, but, that doesn't mean she's evil. Neither is Mordred.

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She has a lot in common with Morgan, yes... or at least, used to.

Very nice story and chapter here !
you earned you like and fav from me :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
Hoping for more in the future with the exact same quality !

I see amazing potential as well as amazing thing already happening in this fic I hope to see more:unsuresweetie:

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then you WILL get more- I'm just getting started!:ajsmug:

>> 4239810 if you want any help and yes I do mean any help at all don't hesitate to ask:pinkiehappy:

Well... That was unexpected. New character, bit of back story, and all in all, very well written chapter. Seems a lot longer than your average word count too. Keep up the good work man! :raritywink:

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Thanks... Did you get the Pixar reference? :ajsmug:

5477940 Yes, indeed I did. Good old Cars, eh?:trixieshiftright:

5478425 what? It was just a random reference. =p

5478437 I'm just messing with ya!:rainbowwild:

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Comment posted by DaringWizard deleted Aug 9th, 2015

"Hello, Merlin... You look just like your forefather, Arthur." Celestia said, Merlin's eyebrows raised, the guards broke their blank expressions, and Twilight's jaw dropped open.

Again,:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:.XD

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A modern Merlin, and it seems magic is common, kinda like that Netflix movie Bright.

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