James and Alex meet God with a choice to be destroyed or become his tool.An older teen wakes up in a forest with no personal memory.Making Mytheria into an army will be hard.Changing MLP without any lost innocence?IMPOSSIBLE!Eh, who really wanted it?
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See its gettig better!
Big words make big story.
Keep this up and you ight have a 2 or 3,000 word chapter, gotta extend the chapter a bit though. Mabye 1,750 min. Or the two thousand.
Thanks, I'm trying my hardest to get the chapters longer, but some cliffhangers are to good.
not bad
muuuch better,and with that you have a new fan.
Okay, I am done I just can't...this is so infuriating to read, I can't do it.
I tried to give honest critique on all of your chapters but I can't I am sorry. Just try to listen to some of the things I said.
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Your comment where the best i am going to miss them ... well i dont have any reason to read the story because there is no more advice and no more redemption ADIOSMIOS *dissapeared*