"Hi, my name is Dusty Tumble and I'm a Earth Pony.
My dream is to become a Wonderbolt."
Not a tragedy nor a dark story, just a slice of a undreamble life.
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Thank you very much!!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it~
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You are very welcome!
Very nice story. I like everything about it. Having that said there were a few errors. It's spelled 'Canterlot' and 'role model'. In the sentence, 'But aren't the character a Unicorn in the book?' should be 'isn't' and finally, it should be 'As I was adjusting the wings,...' Fine story otherwise.
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Thank you very much!
I'm glad you liked the story~
Also thanks for the error check, I fix it right away! ^^
this was a great story! You should write more little one shots!
Centre = British. You guys are the exception to Mark Twain's comment "foreigners always spell better than they pronounce"
Still, I'm a bit surprised that he didn't get a job working ground crew for the Wonderbolts.
A bit worried that this will end like the Monty Python sketch where it shows someone gliding along. Then, they crash & the camera angle shifts to show he wasn't gliding but falling off a cliff
...Did Dusty die?