Short Story: Cheese Sandwich wants to tell the mare he has liked since he was a colt that he likes her. But how should he? So he asks Rainbow Dash for advice.
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SixShooterOutlaw
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That was sweet . Great job with this follow up story.
3904223 Thanks! Glad you liked it!
nice story it was great to visualize it and have the voices to use
3904288 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the follow!
no prob six shooter
I need to make small notes on this one.
Overall, this would be a good story. If you didn't make the dialogue repetitive, use the word "said" too much, or make it a little bit rushed, it would be even better. Since you didn't do that, I suggest it in the future. I know you'll get progressively better.
Nien bad.. nien bad
It was nice. Very well written.
Good fanfiction. The only thing is
where by the name of Celestia's beard are the spaces and punctuation marks
best cheesepie fic I've read so far
4660373 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
lol I hate cheesepie (and cheese sandwitch) but this brings out the good side to that guy
I like this!
Dawww i LOVE cheesepie, and you captured them both perfectly
6013800 Wow, Thanks!
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no prob! i mean it, i DEMAND a sequel!
6013821 I just might have to do that!
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Yay
6014419 It's done! First Dates I hope you like it!
6040946 Awesome sauce...
YES!!!!!!!! TWO BEST SHIPS IN ONE FANFIC!!!!!! SOARINDASH AND CHEESEPIE 4EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awww two shipping specially on Hearts and Hooves Day so it looks like cheese sandwich wanted to Ask Pinkie Pie a question but before he could do that he bumped into Rainbow Dash wondering where Soarin is and she started to get worried that he forgot but then cheese saw soarin as well wondering where rainbow is and good thing cheese sandwich was there before things could end up badly and it really shows how much they really care for each other and now he has to do the same thing with Pinkie Pie and when he got there he told her would she be his somebody which she said yes and she was worried that nobody would like her but cheese sandwich admire her so much and just like her just the way she is that's a pretty cute story I really like that keep up the good work