I'm a unicorn who's lonely.
This story is a story of love, happiness, and totally fun parties!
Pinkie receives an unexpected visit from her favorite party pony, Cheese Sandwich! To her surprise, he wants to spend Hearts and Hooves Day with her. Could this possibly lead to something amazing?
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Nice Story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Cute story. You should really try spacing out your paragraphs however. One big word wall is mildly unpleasant to read. Regardless, I like this a lot.
Keep up the great work! I'll be following this.
3899594 Thank you. I'll keep that in mind.
nice story so far
Same advice as Crab Spy: Space between sentences.
3902700 Thanks! And don't worry, I know you're cool.
This. Is. So. Awesome! I can't wait for next chapter! Upload soon!
Great story can't wait to see more from you
Finally! A Cheese X Pie romance without the "Mature" rating! I've been looking for one of these...!
Is this a one-shot, or will you continue?
3911212 Most definitely! Thanks for the feedback.
Update!!!
Nice first chapter. This is exactly the kind of thing I was looking for!
Please, update!
As much as I like this, the story seems to lack grammar. For example, there isn't a new paragraph for a new speaker and capital letters are missing here and there.
Other than that, however, I really enjoyed it despite being so short.
Nice story! Y oU BETTEr UpLo Ad MoRE CHaPtEsr
