With this being the first of my detective books, please try to take it easy on the criticizing and rating.
I am the very first one , first brony in my family and i am quiet the author and i feel like this is my one and only shot at becoming something of myself as i begin my fan fiction, and stories for all
With this being the first of my detective books, please try to take it easy on the criticizing and rating.
I can sort of grasp the concept, or your idea, of the story. And believe me, it is great! But... Ya need a liiiittle more explainations as well as a kinda different word choice.
But overall i really liked it. Cant wait for more
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Thank you, and I try my best to write, but I am also dealing with other things that take up my time, and I thank you for your appreciation and support.