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and now to wait for the infulx of OMG Y U NO MAKE HER ______ comments...
just kidding but please keep the spam down kiddos
This chapter makes me smile. Changelings are best pony, especially when they're Twilight or Fluttershy.
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you would be surprised at the screw ups you can pull on a computer, especially when you have an asshole friend who renames yoru folders.
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HAHA
OMG Y U NO MAKE HER MANTICORE!
I kid, I kid.
A terrific story, and I for one am very interested to hear the Sunblessed's opinion of changelings.
Keep up the good work, and, to help feed Changelingshy, have the loving, soulful gaze of big macintosh
There you go, my emotions for this chapter.
I admit, I must not have been paying close enough attention... I did not see the Changeling thing coming!
The way her story went reminded me of Wanderer D's Three Sisters story. Good way to introduce a Changeling to Ponyville without it being... awkward.
Story is developing well so far. I really like the aspect of every member of the Mane 6 having a secret they have to confess to... Who will be the next big reveal?
Looking forward to more!
853768 Not going to happen to me, I'm not at university right now, and my laptop has a 15 character password on it. Also, on an unrelated note, holy crap this got featured fast.
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the last two slots on the featured bar are for popular stories when the update. it's been doing that for a while now.
ARGH must have more of this story! its so much fun, interesting AND has fantastic world building! oh PLEASE write lots!
I can't seem to get enough of this.
You made Zecora Rhyme in English in Swahili.
I are confuzzled by that.
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Me no speaky swahili, so untill someone voulenteers to do actual translations you'll have to put up with my craptastic google translate-fu
Are moon blessed or sun blessed better? Would it come down to dark magic vs all of the abilities the sun blessed have?
Abia's (AKA Fluttershy's) history will add an interesting spin to the Wedding, assuming you get that far, which you probably will. Anyway good job!
I was, in an honesty, expecting her to be a hyena.
Changeling.. Wow... Okay. Give my mind a second to catch up.. and done... interesting.
Now if only Fluttershy was a sunblessed, then it would be a holy holey hoof.
I'm going to be giggling about that for a bit.
that awkward moment whne pinkie walks in with twi and more or less says
"hai she's my friend, so don't do that again? Kthnxbai"
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Not getting one from me. I saw it coming.
The whole "I'm Chrysalis' sister" reminded me of The Three Sisters right off the bat.
Pinkie Pie not knowing something... seems as if someone is doing a good job maintaining the fourth wall, it can be difficult.
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From my understanding so far, it is like 2 sides of a coin. They do the same stuff, just differently.
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Looks to me like Celestia designed the sunblessed specifically as a countermeasure to the moonblessed, whereas the moonblessed are designed for survival and enforcing Luna's will. So I think it would be safe to assume that a sunblessed would defeat a moonblessed of equal magical power and skill.
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I realized about half an hour after I sent a message to you about how Fluttershy could be a changeling just how it happened. I was pretty much spot on. I must say that I wasn't expecting a princess though... And okay. Pinkie fainting? CIPE! wait... strike that, reverse it. EPIC! See, it was so awesomely funny that I can't even spell right.
Now, I really want to see Pinkie's partner's face(figuratively of course) when Twilight tells him that she, prized student of Celestia, is the Moonblessed that kicked his ass.
Oh, and 853910?
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! The series is ruined!!!!# Reallyyyyyyyyyyyyy?!?!?!?!? FLUTTERSH!!!!! A CHANGELING?!?!?U SIR HAVE LOST. ME!!!!! AND A VOTE!!!! I MEAN REALLLY?!?!?!?!?!?
..........Sorry had to let that out and exagerate. Actually it was pretty nice... a bit od a dislike for me cause of that but everything else is awesome!!!
Wow you are throwing out Chapters quite fast now... for the Character Tags could I make a suggestion to use Twilight, Mane 6, Luna, OC, Other/Spike for the 5?
I have to say that the Changeling bit i did not see at all.
Very well done and I can't wait for more!
I think it might be more amusing if instead of the changeling taking fluttershys place ala the three sisters style if fluttershy actually hit the changeling hard enough that they mushed together into a new pony =)
other than that a good story
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Why does that sound like something she would do?
"I shall bathe Equestria's threats in cleansing fire, in her name" ~ Camlio the Blood Flame
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Dark magic sounds pretty potent though, and sun blessed can't touch the stuff
Okay to settle the light vs dark arguement now, They are opposites, light is more defensive, while dark is more offensive. It's not the type or power level that decides the fight anyhow, it's how the caster uses it.
WAHAHAHA oh pinkie...
i feel like the changeling part kinda lost me a bit, it just seems like... a non-cliche idea... GOD DAMNIT I WANT A CLICHE STORY THATS OVERUSED
On another note, where do sunblessed get their extra power? Moonblessed drink blood, but unless I missed something Pinkie never never explained what sunblessed consume.
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What went wrong. I do not know it.
Also this fic is epic, good job on making Pinkie collapse.
Still surprised people didn't get the changeling thing last chapter, you practically put a neon sign on it!
On another note, am I the only one that thought this chapter felt different? Is still good but... not the same... if that makes sense?
854090 I think they might be going for changeling style empathy feeding... maybe. I dunno.
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perhaps a little rushed? I was scrapin the bottom of the creative barrel with this one I'll be honest.
854136 I think the biggest disconnect for me was “When I was back in Canterlot, Princess Celestia had me go through a year of Royal Guard training to help me get back into shape... it just felt like it was coming out of no where. Like it was a different story or something. I dunno, communicating ideas is NOT one of my special talents.
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I get what your saying, however there is going to be more to the story.
Twlight is Moonblessed
Rarity is vampire thrall
Pinkie is Sunblessed
Fluttershy is changling
AppleJack is raptor
Rainbow Dash is Ditzy
And Spike is Rainbow Dash
It's so obvious when you think about it!
854183Ok, I don't get the AJ.
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Being a raptor is pretty cool!
... I didn't know what else to put. I just couldn't think of anything better.
854159 I can see what you mean. However, I disagree with you; Twilight's way too good of a fighter to be a rookie. I'd been suspecting that she'd received combat training since chapter 4, but after her fight with the Sunblessed I was certain that she'd gone through through some kind of soldier training. Then again, I do tend to heavily read into things.
i'm sorry, but you just threw the willing suspension of disbelief out the window with this one. Fluttershy can't be a changling, because the entire royal wedding heist wouldn't have been able to happen if she was. this chapter alone would completely undermine the entire 2nd season. I'm sorry, but this was the worst I've seen you do so far. On a lighter note though, because this was the worst, I know you can do better. It might just mean you need to take a little breather from the story. And might I suggest you introduce a antagonist soon. No offence but this is starting to get a little dull.
854244 its an Alternate Universe and its started at the start of the series so switching things is easy
imagine celestia's reaction at this point to the reveals nearly all elements have for her................
854244>>854261 I'm going to point to the Alternate Universe tag for a second. As a reminder, that means that this WILL NOT line up with cannon perfectly (hell, it could have as little overlap as a single character or event being the same as cannon).
Also: "Cannon implies that she stayed in Canterlot studying up until Nightmare Moon..."
No it doesn't. Cannon implies that she is Celestia's student, had no social skills, and that immediately before Nightmare Moon, she was in Canterlot. It says nothing for or against her having been anywhere else for academic pursuits.
854272 But that's the problem. Steam is using an alternate universe but still trying to keep them overly parallel. It's not working. at all.
I wubz!
854302 they kept the start of the series parallel but no other episode has happened yet, no Gala tickets, no Applebuck Season, no Gilda, no Trixie...
I just shrugged and enjoyed, even though I see where your coming from.
854302 Is it? Honestly, I don't see it. It starts with the cannon Summer Sun Celebration, and wildly branches off from there; the only overlap is a direct result of the fact that this is set in Ponyville, the town's population would be the same in both cannon and this universe.
You killed off Fluttershy, but you have her and her legacy live on through Abia. It's so bittersweet. The way that you did it makes it sort-of almost O.K..
While I think that Dryadshy would have been cool, I will admit that with how this story is, Changelingshy probably works much better and leaves many more possibilities open for things. It also makes for a better twist.
853826 Or at least a family reunion.
Fluttershydl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png is Best Pony and now Abiadl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Queen_Chrysalis.png is Best Changeling. When their powers combine, the Best has been DOUBLED!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
853848 The way that I see it is that they are equal, but in different ways. I'm talking about an over-all balance. In my mind, they both have the same number strengths and weaknesses, as-well-as levels of each, however those strengths and weaknesses are different for the two Blessedtypes. Possibly kind-of like two ends of the same magnet.
853915 I look forward to seeing that part.
Whelp, Zecora did warn them that Pinkie would be dropping by. (And here's a shrugging Derpy because we don't have a Zecora emoticon.)dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png
I still love this world that you have created.