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I'm not going to bash it, I'm just going to call it a filler chapter
Mane-iac's going to do what no mare has never done: Take a dragon's you-know-what.
Mane-iac's going to do what no mare has never done: Take a dragon's you-know-what.
Nice chapter. Can't wait to see more
4103001 while it does have a filler feel to it, it it isn't because of the part where Spike has the talk with Hair Stylish
looking forward to how you have this play out! may not be Rarity but at least Spike's about to score with somepony and not just being used
4104103 I meant that it could've been cut completely out and it would've had almost no impact on the storyline itself
4104671 Do you at least like my story, or not?
4104723 of course I do, I just said that this chapter is a filler chapter... I wouldn't even bother to say so if I didn't care about the story
I like this story BUT I Highly HIGHLY advise other things for spike to do have him Follow her with a sceme or Maneiac to start Turning good Something, Anything have her PROVE she loves him have another villain appear and attack him her take the blow. Anything She says she loves him. easy to say. He's not Naïve, soon just saying it won't be enough. your pacing has come to a Screeching halt. I will keep reading but you need to start making things happen
4106742 I'll do that, I'll do that. I was just thinking that Spike might be to good to commit a crime with the Mane-iac, but i might use that in my story, if that makes you happy. Also I will show all of you that the Mane-iac does something so good to Spike, that it will show that she loves him deeply, so please hang on, and let me create a new chapter. By the way: I'm just trying to take a moment, and then let it come to me, you know?
4107155 I should have worded that better. my bad on that one.
well I didn't mean commit the crime just have spike witness one. plus I'm one fan not the whole fandom. I'm just saying there isn't much for spike to do there. I'm sure by now he's bored out of his gored. maybe have him learn her origins, maybe a sob story a karma case or a wrong place wrong time thing. some to give her some amount of humanity(or ponality) that she has the ability and right to love and be loved by spike.
sorry if my comments are long winded
4107345 By the way, I'm not gonna spoil it for any of you, or any of my other readers. So I am going to keep what happens next as a surprise, and you'll see.
4085085 Please I...I'm sorry. This is my first time creating stories, along with my own My Little Pony, and Animal Farm crossover. so I'm trying to get used to it, also: English class isn't my forte, so please don't hurt my feeling, and that goes for the two people that agree with me
That was intense. But I know that even now, I completely trust the Mane-iac, too. If she loves Spike as she says she does, then I say she's earned my full respect