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i just kinda realized something. spike can berathe fire........... wonder if hairspray infused hair is extra flammable.
Well, this should be interesting.
Good story, just need to brush up on the grammar.
3882048 Most hairspray is on flammable these days since we pumps rather than excellerants for the environment.... but since ponies don't have fingers they still might (like in the power ponies episode)...plus hair's flammable anyway...
This story does need some work. It tells a lot but needs to show instead. It's the number one tip for authors.
What will happen if Mane-iac lady meet Princess Celestia or Princess Celestia finds out about Mane-iac's rampage?
Wait a minute...Mane-iac said her ray would make everypony's mane go crazy, Mane-iac appears in the real world, and Fluttershy, who took a direct blast from the ray, starts showing affection to Spike while the Mane-iac acts odd towards 'humdrum'...
...processing...
...processing...
*DING!*
Has Fluttershy become the Mane-iac!
I guess she really did became obsessed with Spike since he instigated her defeat, but it was still the power ponies who delivered the final smackdown on her.
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Sounds plausible. Also consider that the mane-iac saw spike in bed, and the author does not mention fluttershy was in the scene, where was she?
Look I am going to make a few changes in my chapters do everything will make a little more sense, because Everybody's a critic!
3885398 I think the stories are fantastic! And you know what, so is the Mane-iac! Dun-Dun-DUUUUUUUN!
Spike you about to ride a one way ticket on the rape train!!!
Sorry if I was mad, everyone. I'm just having some problems with English class. I hope all of you readers understand.
3890580 I Understand what you're going through. I go through the same with my stories. So I understand everything completely.
Bow Chicka Bow Wow!
With you? On you? In you?
Yes, Fluttershy, is it okay if he 'sleeps' with you?
Ooh, So forward, darling! I approve.
Single? A Virgin?
She has a milkshake that brings all the boys to the yard. And they're like, 'it's better than yours.'
.............when these replies jump so easily into my head it's a sign i've read far too many of these things.
I like this story a lot and shall be following it. Most excellent.
Oblivious should be replaced with something like... undetectable or something, I just feel I should mention, I hope I'm not being a pain. Love the story, I hope I decide to favorite this, I need a Maniac story in there.
i like the music he incorperates
3909622 ... wut...
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dude.... i love your comment! i had the same thoughts for lots of the sentences on here
3909622 or not enough
Can't really blame Twilight for being skeptical. Maneiac is a fictional character after all.
this story is so bad its good.
good job you made a "so bad its good fanfic" by ignoring the criticisms the fans tried to give you.
3982136 What wut?
5020862 Fair point, that.
is she serious.....she think spike is humdrum........HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! oh man i needed a good laugh there i mean that is a more worst mistaking someone as someone else or something else and believe me this beats of changelings mistaking 2 humans for jedi's due watching a star wars movie and mistaking that for a documentary in another fanfic i read
Fun read so far, noticed some minor errors
SLY COOPER MUSIC?! Dude, you just officially earned another follower! I love Sly Cooper
Her assistant. Since when did Twilight change her gender?