.......oooh dear. mane-iac, crazy mare, has a lot of awesome tentacle hair, and pedophile.......... oh dear.

Luckily for you my style when it comes to reading is to go with the flow. Either way good story.

good god, this fluffiness is gonna give me a heart attack!
keep up the good work!

this was soooooo cute

I love when the sex and fuzzy stuff is in the next chapter maybe!

Sweet chapter!

Dear this was cute

anybody else thinking that the Mane-iac just want to adopt Humdrum as her own child or is it just me? ('');

This story, . So sweet, and very interesting, it's going in my favs.

3915148 after reading this chapter I have one thing to do. HNNNNNGGG! *Thud* (human) Flash Sentry:Uh oh! ace_attorneyfan's dead! Again! (pony) Flash Sentry:Last time was with a baby pony fic, but now this! (Human) Rainbow Dash:*Huff* I'll get the defebulator.

Okay sorta Forced response from mane iac, I personally think that being a cute dragon would persuade her that easily to change. plus wouldn't spike call her out on the evil chuckles and laughs?

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I like it.

oh okay skyrim music.....fav

this story has the same amount of cuteness as most spike ships except for sweetiespike and flutterspike
ing this story

I have heard that song WAY too many times

I did not see that coming hello fav 119

I loved when she put a guy in charge. I imagine those guys are gonna fight the power ponies and he'll get to do something he's always wanted to do while fighting them

Spike was unusually cooperative considering she's, I don't know, a villain?

omg , can't stop reading terribleness.
please, for the love of god, kill me now.
block me.
ban me. do anything, just stop me from reading.

what...what...what!!!

This reaction is very unrealistic. I know if it was me in this situation, my reaction would be a little bit like this:

"Nopenopenopenopenopenopenope!"

Noticed some typos

Hmm... I want to believe that she's trying to be good, but at the same time, I get the feeling something's up

Man I can't believe that you know my weakness I have to favorite wait no I can't but I love skyrim to much. I have to shout FUS RO DA okay done with nerding out on skyrim okay back to story.

"Thank you for that, but...Why are you being so nice to me, and...how did you get her from the comic book?"

get here