Yellow fellow bronies of the interwebs. I tend to dream big but that's good for a story writer. My imagination is bigger than ever. So read my sotries in my featured story list. (if i have one yet.)
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Wait why is the chapter saing babysitter should her mom or dad pick her babysitter and there is no babysitter only luna coming so many chap name chang or something? Sorry if I sound like a jerk. -buster
4153991 it says baby SISTER.
4153995 wow I'm am dum thanks for corecting me. -buster
4154001 no prob.
4154005 no one pay attention to the ideot brother of mine in the corner
And pretty good as for my brother I'm sorry he types and talks be for thinking -tank
4154014 that's okay
Three words. GET AN EDITOR! It would have been a good beginning, but there was a series of grammatical errors that prevented me from fully enjoying the chapter.
Did I see a Frozen reference in there??
But I want Chrymbra!!!!!!!!!!
4186116 yes you did that was all the work of my collab partner
4187910 I'm guessing that's chrysalis and sombra. Sounds great but I already SPOILER ALERT have cadence shipped with sombra.
4189310 (Eye twitch) Sister, you better back off before my inner douchenozzle comes and ruins the slight calmness.
I like the ending you did, mate. Gives it a closer in a nice big bow.
Discord meets sun-butt first thot eat her lol. -tank
4189815 your welcome and we can start chap. 3 when ever your ready.
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The chapter was good. How does a few spelling mistakes prevent you from enjoying a story? They weren't even that bad.
4208577it is how I read, the grammar mistakes glare out to me.
i like this story so far can't wait for more
4189310
Well technically since sombra was the king of the crystal empire that would mean that cadence was his daughter because how else would she have been the heir to the throne?
4617233 There a book called "The Crystal Heart Spell" telling Cadence's back story. She was a Pegasus from and adoptive earth pony family and defeated some evil witch with the power of love without magic. Then she got transported to a place only Celestia knows about (probably the place were twilight went to when she became a princess) She became and alicorn and Celestia adopted her as her niece. So no she is not Sombra's daughter.
Now for Chrysalis.
aaw i love it !!
please update again