Chrysalis has never been what most would call an 'ideal mother' to her only living daughter, the sickly Crown Princess Pupa. However, after a dreadful incident, the Changeling Queen is forced to confront her missteps as both a mother and a ruler.
700 years have passed since the night Nightmare Moon defeated her sister Celestia and cast her to far off lands, stripping her of power. Now, the hate in the younger sister's heart has faded, and she has brought Celestia back to Equestria.
(What is There to Life My Dearest Moon?) Celestia has been long pained by the loss of her dearest sister to the Moon over 200 years ago. As an immortal goddess, how does one alleviate the pain within?
Three weeks after the banishment of Nightmare Moon, Celestia is haunted with visions by night and an ominous singing by day that nopony can explain. In order to stop it, Starswirl and one special mare must decide if the truth is worth a million tears
I like it, but you need about 4 times as many commas. Seriously. Some of the run-ons in this story are just painful to read.
Kindred Spirits - Liquid Tension Experiment
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Sorry about that, my grammar isn't that great.
I'll read through it again and try to fix those mistakes.