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Celestia knows that Hearth's Warming is about love, joy, kindness, and peace. She also knows Hearth's Warming is about unity. So why is she so alone during this special holiday? Or is she really alone?

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That. Was. Awesome. :rainbowdetermined2:

This is amazing! Really reflects Celestia's feelings before and safer through poetry.

Awwww, that's a very touching poem, and I like that it didn't end on a sad note, with Luna's return and all. Still, it must have been hard for Celestia going through a THOUSAND hearth's warming eves without her sister. Keep up the good work!

Paradise Oasis

Dream Valley's Historian mare

5815341 You are reading almost every one of my stories, aren't you? Well, I'm not stopping you... Thanks! I appreciate the attention! :twilightsheepish: :twilightsmile:

I liked the subject matter, but I didn't like the poem. It was very clunky and kind of hard to read.

When it comes to poetry, rhythm is just as important as words. When you have verses that are different lengths, it doesn't "sound" right or read very well.

A for effort, though!

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