The 31st annual Equestria Games have begun! Watch 24 ponies fight to the death for glory and fame. Maybe your favorite pony could be the victor, or maybe not. Read to find out!
**Since this doesn't focus just on one pony in the character boxes will be the first few districts.**
If you want to post your predictions about deaths and the winner, I'm kind of curious to see what you guys all think.
Lastly I found that amazing picture on the internet, I did not make that picture at all and am not taking credit for it. It also gave me the inspiration to write this. So kudos to the artist.
Chapters (8)
Hello :) This story shows a lot of promise! I haven't seen a lot of hunger games crossovers in pony and I'm exited to see where this story is going. However there's a few glaring problems. The first is the pacing, it goes from day to night almost in a instant with little to no transition. But pacing is difficult and for writing mostly on a iPad I can understand how difficult it would be to add random minor details. The biggest problem is how reliant it is on the book (Hunger Games) if you haven't read the book you will have no idea what is happening. While the description helps it doesn't truly flesh out how discord took over. Or why the hunger games were created. There was an uprising...and that's it? I mean I get it it's a crossover but rewriting the hunger games isn't exactly interesting. I know we're only a chapter and a prologue in, and who knows maybe the next chapter it will explain more of the backstory. But who am I to tell you how to write your story . I would advice to start to separate itself from the source material, maybe changing the name of careers to something more pony related. Perhaps discorded? Really anything would work but the more you add the more it becomes YOUR story and not just the hunger games with ponies. Alright I'm starting to ramble so I'm going to finish now, I hope you finish this story and that what I said doesn't discourage you from writing :( Best of luck <3 c:
3821651 Actually you're correct. Those are something's I really do need to work on. Probably I'll rewrite it once I'm done.
It's great!
3823430 Thank you, but I wouldn't say that...
YAY MOON BREEZE!!!!! YAY!!!!
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Discord-.......... I must ask, where in Master of Chaos, make the clouds rain chocolate milk, and torment ponies to hysterics, does murder appear? if i kill ponies then i cannot ENJOY ponies. As much as logic annoys me and ruins my fun, it IS simple logic that having ponies kill one another will ensure i can no longer torment those ponies. Besides, killing is so beneath me, not to mention its rather hard to kill a pony with my powers. Once tried to decapitate some fool knight for attacking me when i was having tea, and i sitll got a lance up........... A most uncofmortable area. The fool had to carry around his head for the rst of his life, and had a tendency to lose it, so it is a fair trade i suppose. Why the only ponies i had every actively tried to kill was Celestia nad her moon plotted sister, and that was only because they tried to kill me first........... I simply have no idea where you bronies get the idea that i would kill for fun.
3903100 If you don't agree with my writing then don't read it simple has that.
Aww.... I really liked it...
Who was going to win?
4276377 Sorry
... SPOILERS- It was going to be Applejack and Thunderlane. Applejack would realize that she needed to move (still grieving BigMac), but some career ponies were watching. When they were ready to attack Braeburn (who never really left) jumped out of the bushes, taking the blow. Now this is really what brought her back to her mind. In a grieving rampage she killed both careers (Fleur and Trixie) with some of her bucks(?). While after the the death of all the other stallions, the gamemakers wanted to spice things up for the last two guys. So he turned them both in griffons, FancyPants who claimed he was stronger decided to taunt Thunderlane about the dead Rainbow Dash. This of course made Thunderlane mad, so using his new claws and(now allowed) wings he was able to take Fancy out.
For the district pairs I would have voted for District 5 or 7. They are really strong tributes.