This story is a sequel to The Rejuvenation Play
Mayor Mare and the Ponyville Town Council have uncovered the shocking truth behind Derpy's upbringing. Faced with the wrath of some very important ponies, they must leave it up to Derpy herself, alongside the Doctor, to ensure those she feared and hated all her life won't come after her or her foal.
Warning: Bit of violence and gore in the flashbacks. You have been warned.
Sequel is in: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/352585/you-shall-go-to-the-gala
Chapters (5)
Whisltes!
I have absolutely no words for just how much that I absolutely hate worthless creatures like Derpy's pathetic excuse for an "aunt".
I just hope that her insurance is paid up.
Once certain ponies in Ponyville, and ESPECIALLY six certain mares (ONE of whom, as we all know, has a DIRECT line to Equestria's Princesses), get wind of what she's trying to pull, she'll needed it.
Every bit of it.
7673910 Well, at this point, the Mane 6 are still quite young but give it time.
Magnifying Glass is persistent but not particularly patient and this'll prove to be her downfall.
7673891 Pardon?
7674763 Oof, that's right! I remember that you mentioned in the previous story that Pinkie was a little filly, so that would make sense.
Good. Whatever she (and by extension her lecherous, idiot husband, too) gets, she'll more than deserve.
Can't wait to see that happen, either!
I guess she didn't take what Mayor Mare said about Princess Celestia blessing Derpy and Dinkie to heart.
OR anything that she said, for that matter.
Anywho, I hope you don't mind me asking, but about how many chapters do we still have to look forward to?
Just out of curiosity, you understand.
7675511 Well I'm looking at one or two more followed by a sequel.
There's gonna be a bit of a timeskip before things really kick off.
If you're interested, the sequel involves the Grand Galloping Gala (Though not the one with the Mane 6), meeting a few more of the fillies that would become the Elements of Harmony and a spin-off to a FancyFleur thing I'm hoping to work on.
But after that, the Elements are going to get involved and curd will go down. PONYVILLE STYLE!
Thanks for reading and I hope I don't disappoint.
7675588 Okay, cool. Looking forward to them.
Oh, I'm interested, alright, and I can't wait to read it!
Oh, I am SO looking forward to THAT!
Stuck-up, self-entitled "noble" trash getting their areses kicked Ponyville Style!
Ain't NOTHIN' better than that!
IMHO.
Boy, when this bitch finally falls, she's gonna fall HARD!
And I can't wait to see it happen!
Heh, me, I say Princess Celestia oughta give her AND her lecherous husband to the good ponies of Ponyville to deal with.
What poetic justice THAT would be!
7680463 Things are going to get a little more complicated.
Going to Celestia would cause the Glass family to play their cards immediately and while it's unlikely they'd come out on top, Countess Magnifying Glass is a vengeful mare and if she was going to suffer, she'd make sure Derpy would do the same. The Doctor and pals are aware of this and so they'll need to work subtly.
7680711 Okay.
STILL can't wait to see her get her WELL deserved just desserts, though.
And I cannot wait til they do!
That bitch won't know what hit her!
*rubs hooves together in sadistic glee*
Nopony hurts the mother of my Favorite Background filly!
He will Pay!
7757279 She will, don't worry.
For some reason this reminds me of my fic where the Doctor is dinky's real father
7757308 I just thought it would appeal to the fanbase but it was a good opportunity to give him a bit more character.
Understand that he's not the actual Doctor Who turned into a pony, he's the Equestrian Equivalent of Doctor Who, he's been an equine all his life and shaped Equestrian history since the beginning.
Now he finds out he's a father. No running or forgetting. He's going to take responsibility and protect her from his past with the help of new friends and old.
The Doctor is dinky's father? Better and better!
7757353 Derpy's going to find that out in the sequel.
And the Doctor's going to tell the Countess exactly what he thinks of her.
7757353 Also, thanks for the watch, hope you like the sequel.
*grins*
SO MANY JOKES! Here are the Top 5-10 (in no particular order)
1. You stole Twilight Sparkle!
2. You made Twilight Sparkle cry!
3. You stole a waifu!
4. You're a poorly written character!
5. You have no personality!
6. You stole and ate a donut!
7. You made a show cameo!
8. You were dumped by Sunset Shimmer!
Shining, you rock.
*jaw drops*
Yes Dash, you are.
I hate the rich snob stereotype
I hate it so much
You keep using that, I don't think it means what you think it means
8173195 Yeah, I'm trying to characterise him quite a bit.
I've got him down as a 'Jokester' (Not Joker that's something...quite different) character who tries and fails to be the coolest colt around but it still, at the end of the day, a good friend and ally.
Shining similarly, for any shortcomings, does his platoon proud.
And what were you expecting? It's the Doctor. I'm not pulling any punches!
8173200 Don't worry, Fancy Pants is going to show up soon.
The thing is, Derpy's torn between doing this alone and getting those she loves involved.
You'll find out why she's afraid of doing the latter.
Is there such a thing as disability allowance in Equestria? If Derpy lived in Britain she'd be able to secure financial support for her disability. That is, assuming she could work her way through the labyrynth that is DWP...
9249787
I reckon there is.
9249789
Don't forget childcare allowance!
Those 'Important Canterlot Ponies' we're Derpys parents weren't they.
9769759
Not...quite.