I'm just a teenage girl, who lives in England, who is obsessed with MLP, and writing. Music, stories, poems- everything. I may not be very good, but I enjoy it, and that's what counts.
What is it like to be a magical being growing up, ruling a country with your older sister, not being appreciated for your true talent? What caused Princess Luna to become Nightmare Moon?
This is the lost journal of Princess Luna, the younger sister of Princess Celestia, growing up, learning to live outside of her elder sister's shadow, and falling in love for the first time.
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I kinda like it. While the entries are short and kinda random, i suppose that is how diaries actually are( I wouldn't know), it is intriguing to see the real side of Luna. I'm gonna track.
It's cute, and the writing's not bad
But I wanna know~ who does Luna fall in luv with~~~
Can't wait for more, I'll read almost anything Luna related, and this carries a lot of potential.
Im enjoying where this is going. A few spelling errors here and there, but nothing too distracting.
Excellent chapter.
358812 Spelling errors? Where? I must correct them IMMEDIATELY!
entry 5? No 4?
Still liking this story.
367266 That was just me being the idiot I am. Correcting.
Oh no. The beast that is Trollestia has been freed. Run for the hills! Every man for himself!
grr, caught up already?
But i wanted more.
This was a good chapter. Didn't expect the song though or for it to end with just a hug. I thought it was gonna lead into some emotional development. However I am sure that that is to come.
That ending is so full of d'awww
Keep up the fic, I am really enjoying this side of Luna.
Ha, this is by far the best chapter thus far!
I'm a closet brony so when this line came up and I litterally laughed out loud, I panicked a bit.
Then Melodia said, "That song was for the two love birds at the back," and everypony immediately turned towards us, and I felt myself blush once again.
I almost created an awkward situation from enjoying this too much!
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was well played in this chapter. She just loves prying into Luna's life. 
I agree, this was the best chapter so far. Was totally D'AAWWing when Gem kissed Luna and that was followed by me falling out of my chair laughing when they were called out for it.
Also
Also did anyone else envision Celestia basically holding onto the frame of Luna's bed, basically spread eagle, in the beginning to surprise her? No? Just me? Well, that is embarrassing.
D'AAAWWWW!!!
I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Thanks guys :) Appreciate it. I've been looking forward to writing this chapter so much. FInally, I can actually settle down, and perhaps get some real revision done...
Nah, I'll keep writing instead.
Luna, being the badass she usually is. This is a really good story! Keep it up.
Hahahaha, I love how you display Celestia as always being the toll to Luna. It is hilarious.
A very well written and engaging chapter as per usual. I can only wonder where this will lead to the next entry though. Can't wait to see
Well this is a surprise! Been a while since I've read this story!
As always, I liked the chapter, but the formatting, or lack there of, kind of bugged me. More spaces between paragraphs and dialogue as well as indentations at the start of paragraphs would make this easier on the eye. The only other thing I can remember to nitpick about was you using "boyfriend" instead of coltfriend.
I still have no real complaints. This is still the same, fun diary entries of Luna. Great chapter!
Wow, this is the last story I expected to update. Pretty excited for this is a good fic.. Want comments on chapter? Gimme a sec.
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Engaging as always. I'm curious to see how this dinner ends up since Tia hasn't come. I would bet she's planning something. Let Trollestia take her throne!
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Sorry that it took SO long. It was due to a mixture of exams, being in Scotland, having half a working hand, and no access to a computer.
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I forgive you.
I miss this story. :c
1874681 I'm so sorry. I'll and get next chapter done by the end of the week. But it's just been hard with exams and operation..
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Take you time and don't worry about it taking a while. I just wanted to remind you that your audience isn't dead.
yay, this fic updated! I am also sorry to hear about your hands, I hope they feel better though.
This was a solid chapter, it gave us a better feel for your Luna. Kind, gentle, giving. I was really sad though to hear about Star and her family. Personally I hope that can get a bit expanded on.
Thank you. Hands...you never realise how useful they are until you don't have them. Now I know how Lyra feels...
awsome chapter
also please get the next one up soon im really into this story and i dont want to see it end
thanks
Hahahaha Celestia is such a prick. It does make her a rather funny character though.
Also, I am sure that very first sentence had /nothing/ with how you feel as an author. Nope, nothing is there that would indicate otherwise.
There was a couple things I saw in the chapter that might want some fixing. When you introduce the uncle. There was a sentence that started with "Eve though" rather than "Even" Easy fix. You also mentioned that the uncle was Luna's reason for getting into politics twice, it was a little redundant. Hope this helps and it was good to see this update.
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Yes, you are totally right. That first sentence had absolutely nothing to do with the fact that I am awful at updating this story. Luckily, I've spent quite a few days at home ill, so I've actually been able to do it.
Thanks for mentioning those - sometimes you don't notice little things when you've been writing stories, as well as the essays that should have been handed in last week
great story keep em coming