The Crystal Empire was saved. Sombra was cast away via the Crystal Heart's bright light. The battle had been won, however, there were some unfinished business between the King and the Princess of the Night. She wished to see him. Speak to him one last time. She wanted to finally let go and speak what was in her heart. Though perhaps, it was already too late.
Such a tragic yet sweet relationship between Sombra and Luna.
Good story Note it was very heart warming and romantic.
This should be losing, just something that I noticed, but otherwise great story.
5609228 Sorry about that, thought I got all my typos out of the way Anway, it's fixed!
*Sobbing in progress...*
You did a great job at playing with the reader's emotions in this story. Even though I was crying for most of it, I really enjoyed this story. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing that majorly stood out. Overall, a sorrowful but wonderful story.
As much as I liked this story though, I think I'll stick with SombraPie. This was just too serious for me. I'm still giving you an up vote and favorite though, so don't worry.
is it natural to have a waterfall come from your eyes? because that's whats happening to me. *wipes tear* seriously though, the water-works are over flowing, also, this song by skillet reminds me of this story, or the other way around. (it's called "Lucy")
It is a very sad story, may he forever sleep in groves of lush greens.
Damn, you handle Sombra x Luna way better than I ever could
EDIT: just noticed one of my fics in the Also liked box
And thus another version of Sombra came to be. Sombra of the Sacrifice. This was very nice. And I adore this sad but beautiful Sombra Luna moment
5609277 No problem, besides your work is very good. It makes me wish that Sombra had more of a background in the show.
buck the three ponies who unliked this.
Another unheard of ship? You have my attention.
The final moments of the tyrant , it's bitter sweet to say the least. You You had a strong grip on my emotions the whole time. very well done
NOOOOOO!!!
Amazing cove art
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Sorry cover art
Still amazing
You did a good job with my emotions in this story.
Hello! Have a review. An interesting idea and commendably free of melodrama. A bit on the uneven side, but if smoothed out a bit this could have been really nice. As it is, still worth a look.
This is a very cool interpretation of Sombra! Despite the sad ending, I love this story!
A SURPRISING TAKE ON THE SOMBRA STORY....VERY WELL DONE !!!!!!!!