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Basmati


I'm just a teenage girl, who lives in England, who is obsessed with MLP, and writing. Music, stories, poems- everything. I may not be very good, but I enjoy it, and that's what counts.

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Just imagine that you were walking home after the worst day of your life, minding your own business, when a pony of all things jumps out, knocks you unconscious, then demands refuge.

Well...it can happen.







(For the record, this all happens between the end of Season 2 and the start of Season 3, if anyone wanted to know...)

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 57 )

Well done! Please write more for this is getting interesting! :twilightsmile:
I look forward to hear/read how this turns out.

Write moar!!! Please!:twilightsmile:

me in that moment "yep i'v gone crazy":pinkiecrazy:
well what the worst that could happen *world explodes*:facehoof:

About time my friend! I've started and done two chapters on a major project in the time it took you to write this! Oh well, time to read!


Edit: CLIFFHANGER! You troll! Still looking good do far! Please keep writing!

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I'm sorry - I've just started college, and had a ton of work to do. Not to mention only getting home at 6.30 everyday...

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Ahh, that can be a problem. Still, please do what you can but I guess collage comes first.

40 year old men? Well excuse me for being 15...
Otherwise, another great chapter! Nice to see some bonding. But that's just going to make it a bitch when Twilight has to leave.

40? I'm only a little more than half of that. (Oops! *covers mouth*)
A guitar named Vinyl...
Cool! :pinkiehappy:

1508923 She's based on my real guitar, who is called Vinyl. Because I'm not a closet brony...at all.

1507712>>1508923 When I say 40, I'm referring to the annoying stereotype of 'older' bronies - 40, living in their mother's basement, have no life etc.
I hate the stereotype. Its awful.

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Ok, good point. You win there.

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I hear you. The stereotype is terrible.

Just DONT invite him to see twilight. That would be a big BIG mistake.

Woo! New chapter! Why does that guy sound just like me? That's creepy...
Oh well, THROW A RAVE!

Also, there is a way to deal with haters at school. Talk to the principle, show a couple of clips, arrange a assembly...
"And now, My Little Pony!"

Works like a charm...

1570634 My way was just to constantly be singing the songs.
they got used to it soon enough.:ajsmug:

Achievement get: "Achieve Something" :rainbowkiss:

But in all seriousness- what the hell are you thinking Grace?! One does not simply invite a fellow brony to one's house to witness the awesomeness that is Twilight Sparkle in a fit of drunken randomness! I mean, really, what do you hope to accomplish with this?

1638804 In time, fellow brony, in time you shall see...

Lyra is best pony. I love this guy. Hope Twilight will too. This guy really does sound like me... then again I sound like a lot of people.

This guy... Who is he based off?

Also, GREAT MUSIC CHOICE! You are the best, sorry, second best author ever!

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He's based on a mixture of all the bronies I know.
They're all awesome

She is gonna get so much crap for that...

Hmm...

As much as I trust Josh (Because he is so like me) I don't think that leaving Twilight in his hands is the best idea (Just like leaving Twilight in my hands is a bad idea). Something is going to go wrong, because this is a story, but the number of things is so great that I am truly scared for Twilight.

No comments?
But... But... This is good. :twilightsmile:

No one can resist sheer TS! :twilightblush:

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You shouldn't have said that... :trollestia:

Go on, it pleases us.

GO ON! :flutterrage:

Hmm... Granny thinks that barn could be a nice place for a nap...

This story needs more love.

Comment posted by Crusadin deleted Mar 23rd, 2013
Comment posted by Crusadin deleted Mar 23rd, 2013

2307734 that was totally necessary and not over doing it

Whelp... I was actually expecting a much more cooler headed response than this.
Meh, must be my demeanor and desensitized nature in general doing the talking here.
Hell, barely anything phases me anymore, though I am not certain as to how I would react to a talking purple pony.
I would at first least to clarify that I am actually in the presence of said talking purple pony before doing anything rash.

If a pony poped out of nowhere , I probat would say

ain't nobody got time fo DAT!

If your style has changed, it's for the better.

Well it's still good and I'm really glad you're not dead! Also, when it got to the story telling part, a may have skipped through it. :twilightsheepish:
Sorry. Still brilliant!

2388555 I'm glad I'm not dead too. Living is quite nice actually. I would miss it.

This was great! Can't wait to see Twilight challenge Luna with her new skills when she gets home. Also, Twilight's going to go home very soon, isn't she? I know these things.

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Hmm Indeed. But what if Grace was able to come with her? Hmmmm...

I smell a sequel... :pinkiecrazy:

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Somehow, I doubt she would. She now has a boyfriend (can see it coming a mile away) and her whole family to account for. She's gonna stay.

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But what if she had the ability go go back home?

And maybe even bring her "Boyfriend" with her...

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Hmm...

Government. They are gonna fuck shit up and force her to run. It always happens.

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I'm intrigued. Boyfriend? Who did you have in mind exactly?

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Again - obvious? I'm not kidding - I want to know what you think.

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To be honest it's kind of hard to explain. After reading so many stories and writing a bunch myself, I somehow have a great understanding of any stories plot and characters to the point I can just see things coming. Lots of times I would be reading, then stop and think 'I wonder what would happen if blahblah went to blahblah and met blahblah'. Then it would happen in the next twenty or so lines.

So, instinct I guess. Plus when hasn't a girl fallen for a guy like that? I'm a guy so that sounds really weird...

If this is going where I think it's going, I am so gonna be jelly.

Yeeeeah! New chapter! Gonna get to reading now. I didn't need sleep anyway; it's already 1:30! What could go wrong? Heh... :twilightblush:

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