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Bakmah Genesis


Insanity is only those of the vivid imagination

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Cadence lied. It wasn't something petty, either. She lied when she said 'I love you', when she said her vows, and when she said 'I do'. She never loved Shining Armour, rather his sister.

After telling Shining and Twilight the situation, they work to correct this mistake. However, with over half of the nobles being against filly foolers, Cadence faces the ultimate price for her love, dethronement.

Edited by Auramane

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Finish story:..........Me and my army approves and support this story:pinkiehappy:

It's super good! although, the anger twilight and cadence felt in the beginning seemed a bit odd to me for some reason, idk why. But the part with Shining really made me feel for the guy, good work, today, you've gained a fav!

Nobles are easy enough to handle:
By Royal Decree of the Princesses Celestia and Luna, all who would dare come between two lovers for something as bigoted and narrow minded as them being the same gender shall receive an all expenses paid vacation to the moon.

Me awkward gusta

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Only problem with that.....It kinda makes them look like tyrants

You do know there will be TWO dethroned moments because of Twilight becoming an Alicorn. But, with Shining having gained prince title from Cadence, he will have to marry another Princess to keep it even after the divorce, since Cadence will be dethroned, I suggest Luna after the divorce.

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It's not certain if they will be dethroned. Also, Shining didn't marry to become a prince. He had enough power as. Guard Captain.

Shining is being a bit stupid though. I would forbid Cuntdance dating Twicunt and told all of Equestria what the two cunts did just to spite them. Dating your own sister behind your back and marrying you just so she could keep her princess title, her crown and the powers that go with it?

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But he gained the title for marrying a princess. Still, some rebound would need to be given for Shining Armor.

3862253 I think the author is going for the more. "Equestria is kinda run by the monarchs but the nobility is trying to/is take over" feel to it. I like stories with this kinda feel. Because it shows that Tia/Lulu are not all powerful god rulers. The Nobility can be ever more powerful then a monarch at times. And going against the nobility as a whole is suicided for any monarch.

This story has potential, but the nobles being able to overrule all three princesses is stretching my suspension of disbelief pretty tight

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Ok sure. The nobles overthrow the Princesses and get rid of them. Then there will be no more day and night. Then the rest of Equestria finds out their skies are in Limbo because of the bigoted nobles doing that... well I am pretty sure there is much more ponies in Equestria who would want things back to normal than there are homophobic nobles in Canterlot.

In most cases the Nobility being too powerful would be a legitimate problem. However, Celestia and Luna control the sun and the night. I doubt all the nobles in Canterlot can even muster enough magic to move a pebble on the moon, let alone the moon and stars and definitely not even be able to budge the sun. In short, the only ones who could loose are the nobles.

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Except Celestia at least would probably want to maintain the normal course of day and night even if dethroned.

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I'm pretty sure Celestia can think far enough ahead that a few days worth of solar limbo will be more than enough motivation for things to get fixed.

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Who is more of a Tyrant? Those trying to make sure that ponies who are in love aren't treated badly just because they are the same gender? Or those that would use their power to force others to marry when they don't want to and especially force them to marry someone of the opposite gender because if they didn't they'd loose everything. Who is more of the Tyrant then I ask you?

3862113 I just imagined everyone in thet army giving a thumbs up.:rainbowlaugh:

Dis gon b gud....*grabs popcorn*

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Obviously if he was a raging idiot, as well as a spiteful bastard, he'd do exactly what you typed. But since he is actually not a horrible person, he's not likely to.

Comment posted by Ponylover123456789 deleted May 2nd, 2014

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So, keeping it a secret and keeping the family from declining in the social ladder and being made a fool of publicly because their daughter is gay is a bad thing? Also, if he did call it out, it would backfire on him for the reason he is part of the family that would be under fire for homosexual accusations.

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Philosophy isn't your forte my son so don't try it. Don't look at this situation from the point of view of an overseer but that of the people. Celestia and Luna both using there power to decree that same sex relationships be excepted, will look like an abuse of power to the large popular of those that are undecided and against it. Plus the Political scene is mandatory here. Celestia and Luna have to work through the Noble house's and the courts to allow things. She can say I decree this(example being making twilight live in Ponyvile[s1e2]) But she has to notarized and let it be approved through the system. It's how a healthy Government works. Something that Celestia has indeed made.) but its not truly official. Thus if they use there power to decree this without the approval of the System. the people they need to reliaze its okay for it to happen could rise against them and make things very very difficult.

3865532 I wouldn't care if it backfired. If I was gonna go down I'd drag both of them with me.

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Well, thank you for the feedback.

This happened at his wedding. :derpyderp2::ajsleepy: Thats quite sad.:fluttercry:

She doesn't really love him you say.
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It's The Room with a lesbian twist. :scootangel:

Cadence comes off as a bit jerk-ish here. Don't get me wrong; the basic idea of her being more interested in Twilight seems okay enough, but one would think that if she was going to fake being straight, she'd have let Shining in on the secret from the start.

I won't be downvoting this, mind you, but I don't think I'll be following it either. Sorry. :applejackunsure:

3870541 CADENCE YUR TEARIN ME APAAAAAART

Interesting. I'll give it a like and I'll read it.

Bitches she's queen(princess really but who gives a buck?) she can do whatever the hell she wants! Who cares what some petty nobles think!? :yay:

Futa Cadence, anyone? :trollestia:

How about Futa Twilight, dood? Or am I the only person on the site that likes writing that?

Haha. Poor Shining Armor. That was not information he needed to know.

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Not the only one. Also, all alicorns are futa, and there is a Twilicorn tag.....it's coming. :trollestia:

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Considering that Character Tags, it will happen.

3921063 the nobles have control over the law making, while the princesses help enforce them. or i think that's how it works.

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In a way, yes. Father Mortivida explained it last chapter, but the noble system gets every law passed and creates them as well. The princesses have to go through the Nobel houses for the sake of not disrupting the system and getting violent backlash because of that. I will explain this more next chapter.

3921122 BUT! She is their ruler so she can't be dethroned for something as silly as that! They ARE her partners, she isn't a president. :yay:

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Oh no, she can be overthrown. It's how a healthy government works and if she breaks the ground rules set out, she can be overthrown by either the noble houses or the public or both if serious enough.

3921172 .......WHY!!!!??? King Sombra ruled with an iron hoof and HE was able to stay on the throne?! :unsuresweetie:

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He was a tyrant, not a true King or Queen of a healthy government as Celestia, Luna and Cadence are.

3921188 He may have magic on his side but hey, we are arguing over something I could easily stop right now but I won't. :ajsmug:

I'da thought Blueballs would be the main opponent... oh well.

Comment posted by Ekhidna deleted Feb 9th, 2014

What about Spike, I mean he was RIGHT THERE MAN! A little reaction would have been appreciatted...........or is he with somepony already?

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Heh...we won't know until we make it to Ponyville next chapter.

well forgive me for this for i must go laugh until i die :rainbowlaugh:

Anywho, because I want to keep this teen, I might do what I did with ECWM and make a Clop Sode Story for all da sexy times I don't want to post in here. Comment your opinions on that topic and enjoy the update!

Go 'head. Not nearly enough Twidence on Fimfiction.

If all alicorns are fully hermaphrodites, then for legal purposes is it even possible for them to engage in a technically gay relationship? After all, they can provide evidence of the proper equipment for either gender, and can sire and/or bear children. :twilightsheepish:

Of course, from another, more antagonistic point of view, it could be argued that there is no possible way for them to engage in a straight relationship either. Except maybe with another alicorn. :trixieshiftright:

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