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KDurmeter
Just a simple writer. Mostly erotic fiction, focusing heavily on romance and sometimes kink!
KDurmeter
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3797980
So Cadence is giving us a first-hoof account of the times when she and her hubbie Shining Armor is off duty?
This gave me wood. I am very happy.
3798101
I was trying to keep it vague. It could be you as Cadance, or it could be you as, well, you.
I wanted it to be open to interpretation.
3798163
Glad you liked it!
This is your first one?
3798273
Other than a little greentext I did on 4Chan, this is my first actual published story.
3798278 it's really good.
3798420
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it
379846 can't wait to see what other story's you write.
my laptop just jumped off my lap.
PS. this story rocks.
This was a good piece for your first fic! I would love to see more Second Person M/M stuff! I loved it!
3798678
I hope it did for obvious reasons! Glad you enjoyed it.
3798691
Thank you! I need to figure out what I want to do with the next parts if I write them. Funny thing is, in my minds eye, the person with Shiny was female, but I deliberately made no references to gender, because really, M/M Shining Armor is really fucking yummy too.
3798978 I could only imagine it as male. If you would have had the person give him a boob job it would have been more obvious it was female.
3799376
Again, I kept it vague on purpose. I wanted the reader to supply the gender for this one.
I need to decide how I want to handle gender in the next bits, if I write them.
3799462
Oh, well it worked extremely well.
Can 't wait for the next part.
I vote that you make a chapter one where the main character is male an another where the main character is female.
3800566
I think I may do just that. Because really, I want to do both!
You see this word
I never want to see this word again, use: Mischievously, seductively, amorously,adoringly, affectionately,passionately, lasciviously or romantically if the feeling is right. Because this was the best piece I have read all week and if you continue writing like this no matter the gender I will Like, follow, favorite and subscribe because that was...fun to read
3801392 you could do one of Big Macintosh. Just a suggestion.
3801846
Noted. Just curious though. What's wrong with the word?
3802619
I appreciate it, but I would rather keep the person he's with unidentified. That way, people can fill in the blanks. I've had people put themselves in, other characters in as well. One person even admitted to imagining it being Spitfire in a black thong (Which is Hella hot. You know who you are)
I know a lot of people view it as scuzzy, but I want the reader to make what they will of it. Whether it's themselves, or their favorite character, or favorite pairing.
Maybe it's even a little wish fulfillment on my part.
I think I've decided what I want to do with the next parts. I'm gonna fork it to two chapters, one for male, one for female. They'd be similar to each other in terms of structure, but the norty bits would be different.
3802678 that's understanding.
Dat cover Photo. Damn, I think I just broke my mind wrapping around it.
I swear I was gay for like five seconds after seeing the cover art.
I enjoyed this.
Here are some customer testimonials about this story.
"This story is more enjoyable than sitting in my bathtub and flicking my nipples while I sing the ABC's." That one is from me. Here's another one.
"If I could only take one article of clothing with me to a club, I would take this story. That way, I could wander into the women's restroom, pretend to be a toilet seat, and have a bunch of women sit on my face." That one is also from me, and that is all the testimonials we have right now.
3806273 LMAO funnies thing I've seen all day, thank you
oh great another one of these , i suppose we don't know what gender the reader is in this as well?....
3833471
Nope! I left it vague on purpose.
3834201 still haven't read the other fic so i still don't know how that's even possible to do....
I love that you wrote a female and a male part, so creative and lovely to have a second person fic from a female perspective...
3861988
Glad you liked it! I was afraid I wrote myself into a corner with the start being so vague. At the same time, I really wanted to write something that could appeal to everybody.
Update!
Also, you did one for female and male characters. You sir/madam/other are good.
Unfortunately, I can neither follow you again nor can I upvote this story more.
So here, have a penguin. Penguins are cool.
3867663
I gladly accept! Glad you liked it!
When can we expect the next couple chapters?
3909818
I'm still trying to figure out where to take it next. I have an idea of what I want to do, so likely sometime this weekend.
3909851 Cool. This fic is really good.
Keep up the good work.
Ah, if only I could've known what I was getting into upon reading this. And where to begin...
First off, I must praise you for your descriptions; It never feels excessive. On the contrary I love how it utterly luxuriates in all the fine details. The movement of a finger or lips, the tiny touches here and there that would otherwise be so easy to lose. And that's only the physical, saying nothing of the depth of love and affection between the two that's obvious. Which leads me into the second reason I adore it.
This is self-indulgent, it knows it and it is not in any way ashamed of that fact. This is not mindless fucking, despite the lack of a plot and that's because it doesn't need one. Sometimes all you need is a warming, comforting piece of fluff like this. That's exactly how you've written Shining Armour, after all - comforting. I love how you don't shy away from describing his physical size without it ever feeling imposing. I think that's what attracts folks to him (I can only speak for myself, though) - the sense of a big stud being able to protect you, coupled with the depth of devotion he's capable of.
And the sex... it's passionate without becoming lost in luridness or feeling redundant at any point. It's languid, it's affectionate, loving, however you want to describe it. I very seldom imagine myself in the place of the protagonist in second-person stories like this but there were a few times while reading that I found myself lost in the emotions you created. If I had one serious criticism to offer it would be that there is, lamentably, not more of it.
Thank you for writing this and more importantly, for sharing it with us.
4120186
Thank you very much for your review! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, especially considering I love a good amount of the stuff you have written.
As for there not being more, I'm definitely planning on adding some more to it. These past few months I've been busy working on my senior project, which is done now, so I have time to write something other than technical writing! I've got a general idea of where this arc will go, which probably will end up being three more chapters.
The hard part is me including the two genders. I need to be in a certain mindset for some of these, and I don't want to exclude anyone.
4121544
My apologies, I should have made it clearer my "not enough of it" comment was intended to be tongue-in-cheek! That's not to say I don't want to see more but I understand fully what it's like when real life demands attention like that.
I must say it's very good of you to write both genders. It's refreshing, particularly, to see someone not shying away from writing erotica where two males are so affectionate.
Very very nice!
4122372
Oh no, I gathered that! I've been meaning to get back to this in the first place.
4123479
Glad you enjoyed!
4125319
The only little problem I have is sometimes your word choice is a bit samey (especially near the end of the shining x male part).
That said it was a very wonderful story. I'd totally be gay for buff shining armor. Good work :3
This is definitely going on the list of amazing works.
What 4120186 said.
For real, author, this is a real piece of work in all the best ways. This site is so full of brutal, rough fucking—which don't get me wrong, I love to death, as 4120186 and 4123479 can attest—to see such a fluffy piece of romantic clop well written as this is is really cool. Hope things clear up in your life so we can see some more.
4125328
Yeah, that's an issue I really need to work on. I'll have my pre-readers look out for things like that.
4125384
Thanks once again! Fluffy stuff is really my big draw when it comes to smut. Nothing better than feeling all warm and fuzzy when certain other bits are feeling good as well!
Just wait until I decide to unleash one of my kinkier fics...
That was pretty good for a first timer. I actually like it especially the gay version.
4126845
Technically not a first timer, just the first time I've published anything worthwhile, other than a greentext on 4Chan. But thanks all the same!
I loved it all and can't wait to see what happens next.