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Ghost of Cummings Past
Orewa, O Chin Chin Daisuki.
Ghost of Cummings Past
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Some grammar issues, but enjoyable.
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I constantly attempt to improve my grammar. My friend says I have tendency to switch between present and past tense, so upon my next work I'll see if I can fix it.
I'm glad you enjoy it! Tell me if you have any requests!
yea, no.
this is wrong. only made it to the part with trixter suggested this.
its sick.
Edit: actually read on.
they act like nothing happened. no. just no.
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It's no problem, I didn't expect everyone to like this. I promise I'll write less disturbing fics in the future!
RE to Edit: I admit, they do seem to act like that when it's over, but however, this fic revolves around sex. I didn't want to make this dark or sad so to make a non grim-dark outcome I had to be a little 'too' positive.
Uh... i am not going to downvote this... but... holy hell this was wrong on so many levels it made me sad and angry at the same time
Good read overall, enjoyable, and I kept reading because I wanted to see where you would take it. Good job Kye!
I'm not into BDSM that much, but I can appreciate it when it is presented well, and you did so very well. Reading some of the comments below, I do want to say not to let the distaste of a few sway you in what you want to write. You earned a new follower today so I will look forward to your next piece of work.
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I'm very sorry about that
I promise not to focus on public humiliation anymore!....
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Aww, thank you! I don't usually let negative comments bother me but I usually listen to them in-case I could learn something. I always try to improve, and thank you! Have a good day!
I'll be honest here this is silly and so detached from reality it makes it completely unbelievable. And as a fetish fuel fiction that's okay in my book, especially when the tagged triggers are rather grim to think about. So no down votes because of subject matter because it is unbelievable but still sex that functions without having to conform to morals.
That being said I can't really upvote this either, there are a couple of aforementioned grammer errors and for something that reads like it was rushed there is a lot of padding that really doesn't need to be there
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Yes, grammar is a common problem I face. I didn't aim for this to have a 'realistic' outcome, as this is a purely sexual fic. I appreciate your feedback sir/madame!
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If you're going to be this autistic about the story, why read it? Seriously it has all the labels right there in the description. It's not as if it was deceptively labeled or anything. Don't be faggots about it.
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Jesus man you don't have to promise anything. I can guarantee that if you write what you want and write it well, people will like it. I for one thought it was hot, even with a few grammar issues. If you enjoy it, keep writing. Don't let a few morons like the guys I replied to stop you from writing whatever shit you want.
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I wouldn't call them morons exactly, they just have their own opinion. However I too agree that a description should prepare the viewer for what is to come. I appreciate your support, and I'll improve my grammar for future stories. And by 'promise' I just mean I guarantee a story to come. I just really want to please people as much as I can with fics because I like making people enjoy themselves ^.^
3905586 Harsh words there bro, but i didnt even bashed at the story, i didnt even said it was a bad story, i didnt downvoted it.. hell i dont even like r63 shipping but i had curiosity, and well i didnt liked it, but i can respect the other people preferences and even if i found it offensive i wasnt going to bash it, i just felt like getting that out of my system, and yet here you are calling me autistic even calling me faggot, way to go bro
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The reason I call them morons is because they looked for a reason to be offended. They are similar to certain types of tumblr users in that they purposefully look for things that they find offensive and then attack it in a barrage of bad language (by bad language I mean poor grammar, bad capitalization and shit snytax, they sound like fucking 12 year olds). I personally dislike self insert autistic OC fanfics and cheezy lesbian stories written by edgy teenagers, but that doesn't mean I seek them out just to say somethingto the effect of "Omg thus stury is shit how can ne budy thenk thees is gudd, we need moar lesbian horses n les boys!!!" Thus I have full right to call them morons.
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And yeah I get wanting to please people, but in the end the best writing comes from writing what you want to. If it helps any, I really liked it.
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I'm quite curious about those pages. I haven't quite seen any of those pages, but I'll be aware of them.
I try to combine the two. I write for myself but I really hope that people will like the writing. I do requests, but I may deny a request If I don't think I can work with the idea or I'd enjoy writing it.
Again, thank you kindly for the support
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Wow that was a pain to read, and you did in fact "bash" it, even going so far as to suggest that "this was wrong on so many levels" either elaborate or just leave it the fuck alone. By saying that you do not even like rule 63, looking for the story and then getting offended you exhibited autistic behavior and I believe that calling you a faggot (in the effect of being called a drama queen) is perfectly warranted.
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Hey, These guys would probably like your story; I suggest adding a bit more detail and you will have a delightful story!
3907781 You really like insulting dont you? Not going to waste my time on someone like you, and to be honest i dont want to bother the autor doing a war here with an idiot like you, have a nice day, god bless the block button.
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Wow I'm evil for pointing out the obvious. I'll stop now, sorry about this author, I got a bit carried away.
I don't care how incredibly gay this was, there just isn't enough 63 clop.
Please continue.
I won't lie, this was really hot! It really bugged me the AJ was just revered to as "jack" but otherwise flawless. Thumbs up!
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It's no problem, amigo ^.^
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I shall continue. I'll post R63 projects now and then however they may not be as frequent depending on how busy I'll be with things and whatnot.
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I think that's how R63'rd AJ's name goes. Applejack is Fem, Apple Jack is Male, so for masculine reference I tend to call him simply Jack.
This was very hot, and I find the idea of "Pony Pet Play" very sexy
Sucks there isn't enough of those stories on here
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I'm glad you like it! When I stop being so lazy I'll write another pony pet play fic! ^^
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Sweet
I'm not even gay and I liked this. I should be concerned. I'm not.
Hell, even r63 is enough to annoy me but this seems to not set off too many alarms.
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I'm glad you liked it! To admit I'm not even a remotely good writer but I try my best!
How many porn videos have you read recently?
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Depends on how much porn literature you've listened to.
That my good sir, was a sexsome (sexy/awsome) story. You didn't go over board with the BDSM and that made me happy.
There really needs to be more of this.
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I'm glad this pleased you!
More please. That is all
I may not be into m/m shipping or clop fics but I think you just bent me a bit with this fic. Seriously it was that good.
Good read. There were some grammar issues but it wasn't bad enough for me to stop reading. The characters tag should just be Twilight and Rainbow, since the other characters didn't impact the story.