3798678 I hope it did for obvious reasons! Glad you enjoyed it.
3798691 Thank you! I need to figure out what I want to do with the next parts if I write them. Funny thing is, in my minds eye, the person with Shiny was female, but I deliberately made no references to gender, because really, M/M Shining Armor is really fucking yummy too.
I never want to see this word again, use: Mischievously, seductively, amorously,adoringly, affectionately,passionately, lasciviously or romantically if the feeling is right. Because this was the best piece I have read all week and if you continue writing like this no matter the gender I will Like, follow, favorite and subscribe because that was...fun to read
3802619 I appreciate it, but I would rather keep the person he's with unidentified. That way, people can fill in the blanks. I've had people put themselves in, other characters in as well. One person even admitted to imagining it being Spitfire in a black thong (Which is Hella hot. You know who you are)
I know a lot of people view it as scuzzy, but I want the reader to make what they will of it. Whether it's themselves, or their favorite character, or favorite pairing.
Maybe it's even a little wish fulfillment on my part.
I think I've decided what I want to do with the next parts. I'm gonna fork it to two chapters, one for male, one for female. They'd be similar to each other in terms of structure, but the norty bits would be different.
I enjoyed this. Here are some customer testimonials about this story. "This story is more enjoyable than sitting in my bathtub and flicking my nipples while I sing the ABC's." That one is from me. Here's another one. "If I could only take one article of clothing with me to a club, I would take this story. That way, I could wander into the women's restroom, pretend to be a toilet seat, and have a bunch of women sit on my face." That one is also from me, and that is all the testimonials we have right now.
3797980
So Cadence is giving us a first-hoof account of the times when she and her hubbie Shining Armor is off duty?
This gave me wood. I am very happy.
3798101
I was trying to keep it vague. It could be you as Cadance, or it could be you as, well, you.
I wanted it to be open to interpretation.
3798163
Glad you liked it!
This is your first one?
3798273
Other than a little greentext I did on 4Chan, this is my first actual published story.
3798278 it's really good.
3798420
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it
379846 can't wait to see what other story's you write.
my laptop just jumped off my lap.
PS. this story rocks.
This was a good piece for your first fic! I would love to see more Second Person M/M stuff! I loved it!
3798678
I hope it did for obvious reasons! Glad you enjoyed it.
3798691
Thank you! I need to figure out what I want to do with the next parts if I write them. Funny thing is, in my minds eye, the person with Shiny was female, but I deliberately made no references to gender, because really, M/M Shining Armor is really fucking yummy too.
3798978 I could only imagine it as male. If you would have had the person give him a boob job it would have been more obvious it was female.
3799376
Again, I kept it vague on purpose. I wanted the reader to supply the gender for this one.
I need to decide how I want to handle gender in the next bits, if I write them.
3799462
Oh, well it worked extremely well.
Can 't wait for the next part.
I vote that you make a chapter one where the main character is male an another where the main character is female.
3800566
I think I may do just that. Because really, I want to do both!
You see this word
I never want to see this word again, use: Mischievously, seductively, amorously,adoringly, affectionately,passionately, lasciviously or romantically if the feeling is right. Because this was the best piece I have read all week and if you continue writing like this no matter the gender I will Like, follow, favorite and subscribe because that was...fun to read
3801392 you could do one of Big Macintosh. Just a suggestion.
3801846
Noted. Just curious though. What's wrong with the word?
3802619
I appreciate it, but I would rather keep the person he's with unidentified. That way, people can fill in the blanks. I've had people put themselves in, other characters in as well. One person even admitted to imagining it being Spitfire in a black thong (Which is Hella hot. You know who you are)
I know a lot of people view it as scuzzy, but I want the reader to make what they will of it. Whether it's themselves, or their favorite character, or favorite pairing.
Maybe it's even a little wish fulfillment on my part.
I think I've decided what I want to do with the next parts. I'm gonna fork it to two chapters, one for male, one for female. They'd be similar to each other in terms of structure, but the norty bits would be different.
3802678 that's understanding.
Dat cover Photo. Damn, I think I just broke my mind wrapping around it.
I swear I was gay for like five seconds after seeing the cover art.
I enjoyed this.
Here are some customer testimonials about this story.
"This story is more enjoyable than sitting in my bathtub and flicking my nipples while I sing the ABC's." That one is from me. Here's another one.
"If I could only take one article of clothing with me to a club, I would take this story. That way, I could wander into the women's restroom, pretend to be a toilet seat, and have a bunch of women sit on my face." That one is also from me, and that is all the testimonials we have right now.
3806273 LMAO funnies thing I've seen all day, thank you
oh great another one of these , i suppose we don't know what gender the reader is in this as well?....
3833471
Nope! I left it vague on purpose.
3834201 still haven't read the other fic so i still don't know how that's even possible to do....
I loved it all and can't wait to see what happens next.