• Published 30th Mar 2012
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A Chaotic Adjustment - OverThoughtBrony



Sometimes the only thing that can stop evil is acceptance.

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Author's Note

Dear readers,
Okay where to begin... First off, I apologize for the whole title problem; I have never been good at giving anything a title, let alone a story. Seriously, all of my paintings, sketches, and even my books are untitled. I also did not notice that Aquiscence meant silent agreement (thats the last time I title something at 4:00 in the morning) or that 'Acceptance' was already a title for another story. Next thing, some points will take time to be made. Can't speed it up, it would leave holes in the plot.
What next... oh yeah, sorry about the great amount of mistakes in my writing, for most of this story was written in school where I would have to book it. I agree, it sucked. I had it proof read and it still has some mistakes, but it's not as bad. .

This story, by the way, is not a self-insertion. Well... It was actually a self-insertion originally but now its not because the whole self-insertion thing is... well... it's boring. It also has alot of switching between universes, using 'Meanwhile in ______' and also time skips using '__ weeks/days/years later'. Therefore, it is hard to keep up with it. If you can't keep up then you will obviously think it sucks and your argument will definitely be "It makes no sense" and such.

Another thing, I apologize for taking too long to post new chapters, for internet here is horrible so it will take maybe three or four days (or more) to upload new chapters. I'm sorry, I can't help it. I will also be taking more time to proofread so yeah. It also took a while because of band and school stuff.

Joseph Randy Harris is a human. Don't know how that wasn't make obvious but oh well, I probably slipped up. But he is a member of the United Stated Air Force. There is no United States in Equestria, but I understand the confusion.

Finally, I thoroughly enjoy feedback so don't be afraid to criticize or to tell me what was good because I really don't know what is good with what I am doing. I will be writing a better story of which the plot is unfolding in my mind, but I am finishing this one first.

Thanks to all my fans (all one or two of them) and critics,

-OverThought

Comments ( 1 )

MOAR BITCH MOAR!

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