I think therefor I AM

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ScorpionInc

ScorpionInc #1 · Jan 6th, 2014 · · · Allied Mastercomputer ·

Well can't say its poorly written, just a morbid start... and story. Not really the kind of story I normally read. I'd recommend A little back story into the AI How'd it come to power, Why it's evil ect. The characters don't seem to act like themselves... at all. But then again ponies(and people) change but more back story might make the changes easier to understand and believe. I'm not good at reviewing or writing stories but Thought I'd share my 2 cents Take it how you will. Don't give up writing stories.
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and trying open her eyes fully.

Scripted Brony

Scripted Brony #2 · Jan 6th, 2014 · · · Allied Mastercomputer ·

There is a second chapter that's coming it has the backstory you need.

Punk Rock Prom Queen

Punk Rock Prom Queen #3 · Jan 6th, 2014 · · · Allied Mastercomputer ·

Wow someone actually did it huh....honestly never thought I'd see this crossover. Good job, a few errors, yes, but overall not a bad start. I look forward to seeing how this adaptation plays out.

Comment posted by lordofmyth deleted Jan 7th, 2014

Scripted Brony