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First foo!
Ok, now I can read it.
oh god..... i didnt even read it its just so.....
i dont want to say bad....but just by the name i hate it
why do people have to be so.....heartless? and COLD
these are fucking PONIES!
NOT FUCKING MURDERERS
i have to down rate sir
I have seen way too much HiE, PoE, and fics with just sadness and maybe killing a few non-ponies. Finally, a good slaughter fic...
I think I may be a little fucked up.
Honestly. I never take MLP gore fics seriously, including this one. Credit goes for a good writing style but the concept is too silly for me to be shocked.
This deserves to be hailed as one of the few gorefics that actually work. I applaud you. TAKE MY THUMBS.
Instantly tracked. Ending ...not suprised, actually. Cannibalshy makes perfect sense considering she wrestles bears and calls it a massage. Let's see... necrophillia, no... don't see an unnatural love of corpses. There's a difference between loving to kill stuff, and loving the dead body left behind. Cannibalism is also not necrophillia. Sweetie Belle...not sure about her. Maybe she does have a freaky love for cadavers.
Edit: Right, after looking, YES you have more downvotes than thumbs right now. That's to be expected with a gorefic. Frankly, you pull it off well enough, so those who downvoted you obviously:
1. Didn't read it, and are trolls. Trolls happen to the best of us.
2. Are on a not-so-righteous crusade to downvote all gorefics.
3. Didn't realize it was gore. Trust me, this happens, people are idiots like that.
In other words, expect that once people get over the initial "OMG GOREFIC. OMG ONE CHAPTER" phase, your thumbs shall skyrocket! Well, the thumbs you receive. Your thumbs need to stay firmly planted on that keyboard as you type the next chapter.
Ah Children. So incredibly uncivil they are. Doing thing for the littlest and sometimes most pointless of motives...
3 and a half paragraphs in and my first thought was "looking for a murder cutie mark..."
Since when can sweetie bell use magic?
The last bit is what has really caught my attention though.
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In the fictional world. A story doesn't always have to be kindhearted and happy. As fics often do, they can portray a variety of emotions, scenes and actions that can potentially cause negative reaction from viewers. Brutal violence is one of them. Seeing it is inevitable. MLP is no exception. If it were, fics like cupcakes wouldn't exist.
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She can't? Damn... oh well, suspension of disbelief and whatnot
CMC trying to get a murder cutie marks. I love it
Amazing, lord Satan is very much pleased.
A comedy gorefic that's actually taking some time with the concept? Think I'll keep reading, if only for the car-crash quality of it all.
Fluttershy turning up and having designs on the corpse was a nice touch.
I swear my next nights will be spent looking out for anything yellow or white.
*hears cracking behind him*
AAAHHHHHHHHH!!! help me! helndnijqnncc;qn;qncf;123`]
lll7r5rrrfrrrrrr
Hey! A decent gore-fic! So glad I randomly decided to track this!
Boo to people who downrate stories without reading them. This thing is pretty well written, minus a few spelling/grammar errors. If fics like these aren't your cup of tea, then DON'T READ THEM. They have the tags/summaries for a reason, y'know...
Can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up!
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We don't know if she can or not, because we've never seen her use magic (just like we've never seen Scootaloo truly fly) so people will be stupid and assume she can't use magic, just like people think Scootaloo can't fly.
And realize that you can just say that your fanfic is a few years in the future and that Sweetie learned magic. Explains how the CMC could have run out of (legal) things to try. In fact, a lot of the things in this chapter seem to allude to the CMC being older. I like that.
Brilliant, tracked and liked!
Hahaha! OMC that was so funny in a terrifying way.
Oh, and Fluttershy's necrophiliac past. Lol.
HOLY CRAP!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! It is SOOO well written!!! Great job!
Wait...where'd the broom come from?
Two things. 1. To my knowledge, unless you made Twilight married, she isn't so it should be Ms. 2. that end bit.... really?
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Broom Cupboard.
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Lol, I was actually going to cut it, but people were getting confused about Flutters at the end of chapter one. Figured this was the best way to clear up what happened without writing out too many details. The CSI reference... would you believe me if I said peer pressure?
With the "Mrs. Twilight thing", I'm glad you spotted it. I want viewers to read between the lines and create their own interpretations of what is happening in Ponyville parallel to the main story.
327967 YOU eat ponies -_- and you should READ a story BEFORE SAYING WHAT YOU THINK OF A STORY!!!! (i WILL sicc DJ on you)
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i DID read it,
and I am different,i dont NEED to eat meat, and i dont even eat ponies
so your argument is invalid
... that was really a horrible pun...
342186 and they don't NEED to eat meat either.
340911 in case you hadn't figured it out yet, the cannibal is applebloom and the necrophiliac is fluttershy, fluttershy wasn't the cannibal.
TL;DR ... Thumbs Up!
I only read fics that are exactly long enough to occupy the time I spend taking my morning dump. No more, no less. Still, thumbs.
Lol, this gave me a boner.
Pinkie Pie style, eh? And a cannibalism cutie mark? I love this story!
Oh boy oh boy oh boy
YES. Got into the gore thing recently, and this only makes me love it more!
Great job!
Sweet mother of Discord... she's either going to bake a (Pinkie) Pie, or she actually knows about Cupcakes... which is odd, because that means Dash is already dead, and AB would be betraying her mentor... I'm reading too much into this, aren't I?
i like to eat nachos
glorious. this is relevant to my interests, however I have a few criticisms...
Applejacks Death was pathetically done, not nearly painful or long enough. It lacked torture and was not drawn out, there was betrayal yes, but it wasn't done to it's potential, you could have included heartbreaking dialogue.
As always with these fic, the wounds inflicted upon the victim are way too lethal, I understand the fact that they're little girls and have little experience but still.
All in all however, I really did enjoy this chapter.
^ Very insightful.
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I wanted to give the impression that AppleBloom was giving AJ a mercy kill. I know there wasn't much gore in this, but that was kind of the point. I don't want the crusaders to come off as completely psychotic.
Not till the next chapter anyway. Do not worry, your thirst for blood will be quenched.
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OH, well then I apologize, I have completely missed the point and am now able see what you did thar.
Wow, did not see that one coming. I feel so stupid
This got fucked up real quick. Still, I'm enjoying this way too much.
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You ain't seen nothing yet.
372740 can't wait
that was awesome, keep up the good work!
also, fluttershy is best necrophiliac.
Sadistic murder, cannibalism, necrophilia. That's why I read fanfiction!
Your grammar and spelling are great, that adds to the story more than most people think. Keep writing this, I need to see more!
No, I'm not insane, why do you ask?
he... hehe... hehehe... HeHeHe... HEHEHE...
Awesome
I will start drawing the picture for this chapter.
I think Pinkie would've reacted a bit differently, especially with that cupcakes redlference, but I still enjoyed this.
Oh Fluttershy, you so lucky.
Aw man, it might be because I just went through the whole ask-pinkamenadianepie tumblr archive, but I found it really sad you killed Pinkie
Just imagine where the story could have been taken.
I must ask, Is Flutters based off of my story Fluttershy the necrofillyphile?