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EEEEEEEEWWWWWWW!!!!! V NECK!!!!
I would scrap it all into one chapter, even probably next too. I don't know what to think about this. Its nothing interesting right now. Character have some kind 6 sense (I know it was obvious in show but for them it wasnt) what is totally ehh turn off for me.
Gonna give it chance anyway
I don't think this will become a popular story honestly. OC stories rarely do...but I will give this a chance.
this is actually pretty good . Can you jsut put more details in the gore parts you now like were the blood splatters.
try this instead
SEE MORE BLOOD AND DESCRIPTION MAKES ANYTHING A LITTLE BETTER
Keep up the good work man I can tell this is going to be a great story
The blood it makes me so happy.
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>mature
>gore
>NOT sex
What kind of two-bit romance is this?
^ That's a joke, by the way.
4222933 Well I'm not really good at clop-fics or any sex related story, but what I am good at is gore! So much gore.
4222952
Romance without clop is like Dragonball Z without filler.
4222958 Sorry pal, If you were looking for clop there are a bunch of other writers on this site that write stories like that, I'm just not one of them.