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You need to fix the speech, I couldn't really understand it.
Use speech marks when you have the chance to edit the story.
Interesting, tracked
O___o
Rainbow colored cupcakes, 'Cupcakes' reference?!
Not sure if want...
Not sure if clop.
This is disgusting, but I still love it and eagerly await an update.
I'm not normal, am I?
Esto es un poco fuerte y duro... pero no se porque me llama la atencion estas clases de mierdas.
A seguir este relato infernal.
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
<*thwack*>
*flop*
<*sigh* you managed to get him stuck in a loop... CONGRADU-FUCKING-LATIONS!!!>
he should really put a 'sex' tab on this thing
WhathefuqdidIjustread.
I......what
Ima shoot myself now, ok?
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I like how you put a warning when there ISN'T rape.
XD eeeyup no rape here and that semen sure gona stick after waking up not to mention stain on pink... sweetybell is white on her own so than wont be a problem...
No pun but pinkies fucked
FAIL FAIL FAIL
WOAH!!! sweet ^///^ love this shit!! cant wait till she gets her hooves on scooteloo... force her to take the pill and fuck her friend but keep her from cumming and let the trobing pain be her final sight leaving her by her self again hehehe XD
364457 thas a shame cant see it ^^
"looking forward to feel two magnificent pieces of pony flesh in her mouth."
Santa Virgen de Guadalupe... Esto es genial!
yay ^^ that was totly asome dude!!! did you already writed this or after my segestion? hope to see some more... if there where microwaves she could heat up the body... hot water mite do as well but it will soften and get the corps all rimply and we--- never mind that... grany smith is very vragile be easy on her
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.............
What did I just read?
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A story about our favourite Pinkie Pie, of course!
Dear god why?!
WHHYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!
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Srsly, guise, why nopony here would make a comment about the quality of the story? Please, something else but "WTF?!!1"?
most perfect ^^ i knew that filly had it use someday... damn well writed
woah... thats.. damn.. its yust ... nice
Not, bad. Better than chapters 1+2. I think you need to progress the sex a little slower though, and some more descriptions would be nice. A good idea is to have multiple positions, not simply saying "They fucked for 20 min". Describe those 20 min!....also it would be nice if Pinkie Pie forced Scootaloo to clean off her blood, faeces and semen covered cock. Overall its good.
Hmm... Will have to read this later tonight. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
have a clopfic master proof read this for you. As the son of an English Major, it drove me nuts. But I'm too busy with essays to fix it. try Jexxazrez. I'm sure he'd love to help. Tell him I sent you.
Fuck me dead, that was weird.
Very hot.
I dont like the fact scootaloo was brutally raped in the asshole to the point in which it split open.....twice
Why did it have to be her, my favorite character
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That was my favourite part
1718604 you sick bastard lol thats pretty weird dude
i regret nothing
wow just wow
i actually feel sorta bad for pinkys targets sorta anywho going to back away slowly and come back to this later
you said no rape...... lies you raped my sanity..... jk
id need to be sane in order for you to be able to even attempte to rape my sanity
love tghis one out of all of them so far also.
it was nice knowing you scoots she will be missed ..... oh wait she survived nm
i think someones enjoying this a little to much but who am i to judge every insane person has there own thing that makes them happy mine just isnt this.
not saying that i dont like it its just not as hyped up as burning-ruin-666
it is very well done i felt a little sick no affence its just my dream is to become the owner of a graveyard and well i hate the fact that some people take joy in defiling the bodys of the dead its actually kinda funny how i have more respect for the dead then for the living.
on a related note please whenever you go to a graveyard please take some time and pay your respects to the dead and if i catch any of you robbing them or worse ill fucking kill you.......slowly then bury you and leave an unmarked tombstone where i buried your body kikikikikikikikikikikiki
wait did scoots make it out or what
jimmies=rustled
This is probably the most disturbing stories i have ever read...kudos to you.
Well that escalated quickly... Maybe Pinkie should not drink strawberry flavored futa afrosodiac... Or maybe she should.
I'm gonna be honest, all the other chapters gave me an involuntary boner... but this chapter made me loose my breakfast... I don't usually rely on petty insults but... Fuck You!
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Normal is boring. Are you boring?
It took me a few months to find this fic after seeing it once a few months ago and deciding "sure, why not? I finally started rsading it today, and I say wtf? Pinkie raped Twist and Scootaloo and chocked Pipsqueek to death with her dick (... I... never thought that last statement would ever be stated in history of forever)!
Also, for your enjoyment, a skit!
Me: Read my fic, Adventurers in Equestria!
You: No.
Me: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
You: Fine, I'll read it.
Me: YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!
*gag!* I just read this for the story! I swear! I figured out that TWILIGHT FUCKING KNWWPPINKIE WAS GONNA RAPE HER WITH THE CANDY EARLIER. And kindle is erk.
I threw up slighyly while the page loaded. bad sign.
This was traumtiing, but remove all of the child rape and the necrophilia, and the story is actually pretty good.
Okay. Kinda rushed, so the pacing is throwing off some.
Foalcon,
Futa,
Rape,
2 out of 3 good points with me. I'll keep reading.
For now.