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Lucefudu


Iatrogenesisist extraordinaire!

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Do more of these plz!

This is most epic and should get sequel

Twisted, sexy, fourth wall breaking, and torturous, did discord write this? It would also explain the sudden phalus ... among other things, besides, I... sorry, lyra is barfing...

Th-that was RAPE! D:

This is one of those stories that I just can't seem to form an opinion on.

I liked it. I thought it was funny, and I chuckled a few times, but it's not a favorite, and I can't figure out what's keeping it from getting to that spot. It could be that it felt a little rushed in certain spots, but looking at the dialogue the narrator uses, I can't help but wonder if that was intentional, and if putting more description into those segments would actually detract from the story.

Really I'm just confused, really, really, confused, and by no fault of your own mind you. :applejackconfused:

Was expecting normal, pony on human action.

In the end, I got something way better!

3708739 If'n yer send sum booze our way, I reckon' we'll help each other par'dner. :ajsmug:

3710335 Long time no see!
Though, I have to say that a sequel or some other story like this one have slim chances of happening. It was a spur-of-the-moment thing. Worth it, though.
I especially liked how we were able to write a strange, random comedy without appealing to "OMG SU RANDOM!!11" situations like some other examples 'round 'ere. It was an even funnier experiment because I finally got to write something while drunk. And it did not turn out like how most "written while drunk 100% legit for realz best believe!!1eleven" fics often do.

Makes me question if [some] bronies actually know what alcohol tastes like.

3710453 At first, Owlor had the idea of making the narrator akin to the one from The Stanley Parable. But I went in and made the text too... obscene and mocking for it to work. We opted for Discord without letting out too much clues.
(Please take note of the character tags, how the narrator describes itself and, most importantly, Rarity's cutie mark in the cover image)

3710726 Don't be silly. Male rape doesn't exist.
Also, it isn't rape if he doesn't say no.
/extremely bad jokes

3715028 Well, it was an amusing idea that prompted us to grab some beer and sit down to write. The narrative you see here simply flowed from my fingers as I typed. It isn't actually a bad fanfic, as I can definitely someone getting off from it as it stands, though it wasn't our intention (hence the rushed aspect of certain parts). As the A/N suggests, we deviated from our main goal, only willing to "write stupid shit" in order to meet the exact thing we thought amusing.


3715868 I'm glad you liked it (or, what seems most likely, didn't abhor it), though as I stated above: the sensual aspect wasn't our focus. If it were, it could've been slightly more clop-able, I'll concede.

3716713
actually, statistically speaking, males are more often raped:twilightsmile:. but it is often not reported:facehoof:

3733214 Got some evidence to back that info up?
(Genuinely curious)

3733405
unfortunatly, the statistics were in a "current controversies" i can't remember the rest, sorry, cool pic though

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