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When we last left our hero, Sebastian had just been introduced to the mysterious powers of a certain Draconques. Set a few months later (say, May 2020), Discord's prescence is finally revealed, and the Mane Six have to fight him in the last place anyone would ever think of- Sebastian's mind. Will they be able to rescue him in time? Is Discord as bad as he really seems? Why is it that Sebastian always manages to get laid? Seriously, why is that?!
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Comments ( 108 )

"When we last let our hero" - left.
Would you please make it clear in the summaries, which cross-over(s) are involved?

I LOVE YOU MAN

AWWYEAH!! DISCORD!! :trollestia:

This my friend, is a great story off the bat.

Hell yeah hes back and better then ever

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I'm just curious. Can you give a few examples of these spelling errors Neo Draco?:rainbowhuh:

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First let me just say that I'm his editor. So you can blame me for any of his errors if you'd like. Secondly, the last part wasn't a typo. You have to realize that some writers have different styles and possibly you didn't realize that Sharpwit likes to write Applejack with her southern accent. Hence forth the "y'all's" and "wither" parts. As for the first parts you commented on. I don't like to heavily edit an author's work. I only fix up any apparent typos I see and if a sentence is incomplete I will fix it up. But I will not change a sentence, nor a line of dialogue, solely because I think I can write it better. That very insulting to the author.

I understand your concern and if Sharpwit did read your comment I pretty sure he'll share the sentiment, but you need to understand that some authors write a certain way, and that we have to accomidate ourselves. Also thank you for replying. You were a great help.

By the way, *facepalm* The first two lines you showed as examples have errors. How could I have missed those blatant errors! Again thanks.

2617369 To be fair to my dear editor, though, I totally fucked up the story description! :twilightblush:2617163

I haven't read the prologue yet but I see what your doing. You are ending Equestrian Refugees and starting another "book" (theoretically speaking) continuing of from where the last story ended.

...How could Sebastion NOT see the fourth wall thing and see the infinity of the universe by making himself self-aware? Oh right..he's a story character and you have full control over him and the events that go on. XD

2624340 Yup! He is the subject of my whims! :trollestia:

my god Luna is such a perv maybe a bigger one the her sister :twilightsheepish:

2624455 But, what if he did become self-aware? Then he would be able to topple the rules of the universe! All of reality would crumble! AND THEN YOU WOULD GET POWER OVER EVERYONE AND EVERYTHING! REALITY ITSELF WOULD CRUMBLE! HAHAAAAHAHAHAHAA!!! *cough* Ahem, sorry. The drums are going on in my head at the moment from listening to them for too long on youtube.... Join us! The drums shall set you free!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q4bddx5xTrI

2624526 Huh... Might actually incorporate that into the story... :trixieshiftright:
2626571 Thank you! I think... :trixieshiftleft:

I like how you joked about Pinkie 4th wall braking jokes.

Oh thank Celestia another chapter!! This is just interesting, but I hate love triangles. They're so frustrating. :facehoof: (RP not IRL)

The triangle will just have to get bigger.

One question: What's so great about Dr. Who anyway? I don't get it:applejackconfused:

This is kinda turning into a clop fic and some characters are OOC

2682081 You must watch to learn, young one...
And yeah, I guess, but don't worry! That part'll be over soon!

Can't... Breath..!:rainbowlaugh:

“Right now, you’re friends

*your

your shows possesion, while you're is short for you are. It's quite simple

2726974 I'm just stating the obvious:rainbowderp:

Great chapter as always. Love the way that you portrait your characters, full of emotions and personalities.
On a side note I can't figure out the feelings of Fluttershy and Rarity towards Sebastian, are they just teasing, but somehow i feel that there is something else in there...:trixieshiftleft:. (please don't tell me i don't want to ruin the surprise whatever the case may be. if for some miracle you read this)

Rainbow's the sword?! Brilliant!

Question: Is Sebastian Espinosa your real name? (I hope not)

2864357 Nope! Just a character I based off of a close friend of mine!

i actually felt the feels coming alive

thank you for making a zelda one

Enteprise VI instead of Enterprise-F... "Hail the enemy" instead of "Onscreen" when responding to a hail... "Galactic Federation"... all things that made my inner Trekkie die a little on the inside.

2878918 I was trying to follow a more "pop culture" take on the Star Trek Universe rather than the actual fandom, just to keep everyone on board with the story.
Thinking it over, that was probably pointless :ajbemused:
However, the ship's name was actually supposed to be an original one, not the ACTUAL Enterprise in the show, so no need to worry about that one!

Aww yeah! Legend of Zelda! :yay:
Maybe I should play those games. :derpytongue2:

wow shit are you going to make Sebastian become Ash williams from evil dead if so fanboy Squee :pinkiehappy:

http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101008054338/evildead/images/4/40/Bruce_wizard.jpg

Wow, this is intense!! loving every second of it too! Seriously, I'm with Discord on this one, these challenges are an excellent way to build character and get everyone ready to take on Blueblood, maybe even overcome that magic that seems to erase the trauma memories of everypony. If that works, then they can fight back effectively.

Well done, and looking forward to more!

2946022 They walk, but only when I tell them to walk :trollestia:

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Clancy says his base is sixty miles away but should take ten minutes to reach?

yep you made him ash form evil dead :pinkiehappy: my love for this story has increased by 999% :twilightsmile:

Sebastian got the CMC into WoW? Dear god... WHAT IS AB's NAME IN WoW?! I must team up with her, to kill some hydra! :rainbowdetermined2:

FINALY you had her do a Fourth Wall thing. What made you deside to do it for so long? I bet Pinkie is now annoyed.

the year 2480, where you were captured and experimented on by a newly evolved human race

Isn't that the plot forthe movie, Elysium?

“OH, YEAH?! WELL, WELL, well… YOUR BEARD IS STUPID!!” Celestia says triumphantly.

A giant record scratch goes through the room, and everything just stops dead.

I expected Discord to start laughing, and say something that is saying how pathetic she is being.

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