Max Powers and his current companion Thomas set out on an adventure to Equestria. While on their way to their destination, something goes horribly wrong causing their transportation labeled as 'The Doorway' to collapse, leaving them stuck in Equestria. During their stay in their new found home, they must fit in as the only humans in all of Equestrian history. This is their story...
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327468
I enjoyed this very much my good sir
Keep the story going please ~
328816 I have a great story set up.
I just need to make it more intreresting.
And make it more immersive...
Thanks for liking it though.
it was kinda meh mr caboose
but then again its better than any of my stuff so you win
423429 It's boring right now, buuuuuuut...
It will get more exciting.
-Richard
423438this is more exciting
423504 I'm okay with this...
I like the Nostalgia Critic.
-Richard
423515who doesnt?
I NEED YA'LL TO LISTEN TO THIS OK?
GIVE ME YOUR OPINION HERE YOU GO
423549 I watched the music video and then listened to the music...
My response... Good music, wierd lyrics.
I'm okay with it...
-Richard
Just out of curiosity, are you going to put Doctor Whooves in here?
424000 Yes. He plays a major role in the story.
Since this is only the first chapter.(prevouis chapter was a prologue)
I just can't jump into the main story right in the beggining.
By the second chapter, things will start to get more interesting.
-Richard
424055
Out of all ponies excluding the main six The Doctor is best pony.
And he's also best time lord.
424062 He is a best pony, except for Vinyl Scratch.
She is best pony.
1.Vinyl Scratch
2.Doctor Whooves
3.Lyra
That's my favorite background list.
*excluding Derpy.
-Richard
424078 Hmm, agreed.
But what of Octavia?
424098
Here's my extended list.
1.Vinyl Scratch
2.Doctor Whooves
3.Lyra
4.Carrot Top
5.Octavia
And that's my extended list.
also... Fluttershy is best pony.
-Richard
424121 Well everypony is entitled their own opinion.
424127 So I assume you read both chapters.
You did right?
-Richard
424133 Yes, and I enjoyed them very much.
424138 If you wouldn't mind, just tell some other people about this story.
When I first released the prologue, I rushed it and released it with MANY mistakes.
I still got good ratings, but it stopped some people from returning.
This story will also have a new chapter released at least every week.
also if you want, you could like and favorite if you already haven't.
-Richard
424154 K, I have two friends who might read this.
424159 Cool, every view counts.
I also want to keep positive ratings to encourage readers.
-Richard
Ruuuuuuuun! img.ponibooru.org/_images/80208b3dd4272a21c9cfdda74b0ac5cc/96398%20-%20Giorgio_Tsoukalos%20hand%20heartstrings%20human_behavior%20Lyra%20meme.jpg
424325 I see what you did there...
Lyra is very interested in Max and Thomas, as you read back there.
-Richard
424121dont you dare go near fluttershy
at least not in this unverse, ok?
425698 I don't intend on using the mane six majorly in my story.
-Richard
425713 still.
stay.away.from.fluttershy.
425742 I'm kidding, of course.
But she's not a main character.
Lyra is....She wants their body.
-Richard
425760spoilers much?
425763 That's not a spoiler alert!
This is!
Blah blah blah Doctor blah blah Camping blah blah Crazy Lyra blah blah...
SO MANY SPOILERS!
-Richard
425774*chinese mode ON*
BUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Awesome chapter Richard, I'm kinda pissed that you ended with that cliffhanger though... I might just...
498871 Don't worry, I'm going to release the next chapter either Thursday or Friday.
-Richard
Oh my little time lord...fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/276/5/d/you_have_met_a_terrible_fate___by_momokariya-d3014ka.png
504588 Don't worry about the cliffhanger.
Chapter III will be released tommorow.
-Richard
I kinda figured it was the Doctor. Oh well, it makes things twice as interesting I must say.
530535 Yeah, I have big plans for him in the future.
-Richard
Comment.
A bit of an interesting chapter to have Max encounter Berry and almost end up having unexplained things happen. Hope to see more of this story soon!
Also nice job with that Half-Life reference there, wasn't really expecting that.
Hey richie one thing how do you borrow cake?
806532 Simple. You just borrow it and give back a small portion of what you started with.
-Richard
Um ponies dont have breasts they have teats instead just so you know.
806615ah but...thats not borrowing borrowing is when you take summthing then give it back they exact same way no more no less like what you are saying for example if i like asked to borrow a movie and then eat a piece then gave it back is barrowing...no what never mined doesent matter.
806662 Oh no, the breast is actually the part of an animal's body that corresponds to a person's chest. I've seen the word tossed around quite frequently so I started using it.
Sorry if you were mistaken.
-Richard
806729 We must have different definitions of borrowing then.
On a side note, how are you liking my story? It helps to know if I'm doing good.
-Richard
806754its good just kind of boring right know. oh and what do you think of my story?
806771 I actually haven't read yours yet. I've been tied up reading other stories that are past due. I will get to it eventually though.
-Richard
806807ok then.
Me gusta! I just started reading the whole thing, and I just finished. Let me say again, ME GUSTA!