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An unexpected visit from an old acquaintance results in Twilight and her friends being transported to a mirror world ruled by a cruel, sadistic version of Discord. Learning that their counterparts have been killed in this new, violent world, they are tasked with carrying out the quest that they had already accomplished in their own world - defeat Discord, and free the land from his iron fist.
However, this is a new world, and new rules apply. Will they survive their ordeal?
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This was a fantastic story. Ignoring a few oddly written lines and some uneven pacing, this was one of the better adventure stories iv read. Great work
3700439 Thanks! I know I have a little trouble with pacing in my writing. Sometimes I just get a scene in my head and really want to get to it.
This story made me cry more than I have in the last few years.
A beautyful, yet sad adventure and a fantastic piece.
It was magnificient to read it.
I feel that I must say it at this point: This story is amazing!
This was good.
I can't say much more than that. I'm not the best at literary analysis, so just accept my joy at reading this story. It was good.
Now, I must be off, and see if I can get anyone to take a look at your stories. Because really, they're good. You deserve more comments and thumbs than you have.
... you misspelled "Harmony" in your title.
4025698 ...Wow, that's really sad. How did I not notice that?
Fixed.
Before i read thus, what role dies spike and twilight play?
Because if I don't know, I don't know what to do.4025706
I love this story
, even if I bawled my eyes out
.
4057313 Well, I don't want to give away too much in the comments, but they both play major roles. You'll have to read to find out.
4058502 That's all I needed to.hear.
I would have assumed that instead if dying, all if the bearers would be sent back home hence why twilight said I lost all my friends instead of the heroes fell.
But rainbow dying ripped that thought to shreads, and make me suddenly wish somebody dies in a gorey fashion...
Does than make me evil?
Certainly.
Oh, what the hell... Damn it Spike.
Saw that commin.
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
Yay!
... Well, that's discord Yor ya.
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
:(
What?!?
Dat end tho...
Love the story
Your talent for writing is amazing. I enjoy the set up, not to mention the creativity of the plot, but I have to point one thing out( and it is one of personal opinion more than fact.) Chapters should normally be several times longer than this. What I tend to do is combine chapters and use ---- to separate them instead.
Awesome story! My only criticism is that I think killing all of Twilight's friends kinda took the meaning out of their deaths. For example towards the end it was less "oh no, Fluttershy!" and more "lol bye Fluttershy". Call me heartless, but I think it would have had more impact if just one of them had died near the end.