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I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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Fleur de Lis has recently found herself enraptured with Pinkie Pie and her partying ways. The problem: Pinkie is what Fleur's typical crowd would refer to as a "common pony," and her parties aren't exactly seen as the type of event a sophisticated mare should be attending. Regardless, Fleur is determined to get closer to the intriguing party pony, even if she has to sneak around to do so.

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Comments ( 150 )

Cute story! I like where it's going!


P.S. I have added it the group Romance is Magic! Feel free to check out the group!

I'm really liking this so far. Keep up the good work!

this deserves the feature box

This.
F:yay:ing this.
I love it.

Romance?

...

Fleur and Pinkie...?

...

Alright. I'll bite.

~Skeeter The Lurker

You've just got me intrigued.

I happened to know how you're going to pull this off.

There is noone like Pinkie, Fleur! I love this story!:heart:

ugh... where's a Yuri when you need one?

About that Fleur/Pinkie part... thats a pretty rare ship... I like it^^

FleurPie? Count me in!

mumsy and pop-pop

That... That is ADORABLE! :raritystarry:

Oooh I like where this ship is set sailing towards~!

beginning the book:
:ajsmug::applecry::applejackunsure::derpyderp1::fluttercry::heart::pinkiehappy:
when the book ends:
:pinkiegasp::ajsleepy::applecry::fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair::twilightangry2:

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Personally, think Fleur de Pie rolls off the tongue a bit better

How 'bout PinkaFleur?
Love, love, love, love the story btw. :heart:

If you would like any assistance to finish this story, I am more than happy to help. I love the story so far and I have plenty of time. Feel free and let me know. :raritywink:

Interesting premise.

Pinkie's general inscrutability aside, I'm curious to hear more about what it is Fleur is seeing in Pinkie, as far as the way she moves and carries herself.

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That or Fleur de Pink.

Or Flinkie.

This ship is sailing on a breeze that i am really enjoying. Fantastic work! :pinkiehappy:

Looking forward to more of this intriguing story.

This is so cute I got super diabetes

I am not sure if Pinkie is mature enough for a relationship.

It's too cute :pinkiehappy: Pinkie will be unaware of any flirting done by Fleur :pinkiesmile: which is really cute

3791370 I'd see a Doctor.. A CUTE DOCTOR! :pinkiegasp:

I can't wait to see Pinkie be completely oblivious to Fleur's flirting.

Ugh.... How I hate people like Mint.... Where's a Yuri when you need one?

I take it either Minty doesn't know or care that Pinkie is a national hero several times over, immortalized in the castle's stainglass windows, one of Princess Celestia's friends, or a royal bridesmaid?

Or it it that Minty (and maybe Fluer too) don't realize Pinkie the ditzy party pony, and Pinkamena Diane Pie (national hero) are the same pony?

It might be nice to see Minty end up in the scandal sheets for bad mouthing a nation hero, or Minty being deemed not elite enough to get in a certain very highbrow event, yet Pinkie waltzes in right in front of Minty without even an ID check.
"What, you let HER in but not I?" gasps Minty to the Doorpony.
"Ma'am, that's Lady Pie. Of course I'm letting her in. Um... who are you again?":pinkiehappy:

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I'm just curious cause I've seen this reference twice and have no clue what it means. What's a Yuri?

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The term Yuri refers to lesbian anime stories or characters.

But Yuri is also a female name in Japan. There is a very popular anime character named Yuri, whose partnered with Kei. They are a pair of futuristic galactic police officers who call themselves the Lovely Angels. Everyone else calls them the Dirty Pair.
Yuri's idea of a restrained response is that the city is still somewhat inhabitable, and her adversary isn't missing any limbs
Plus she hates snooty or pretentious people.

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Indeed. For two ponies whose livelihoods revolve around knowing the latest people, events, gossip, and social hierarchies, they seem remarkably uninformed regarding current events and several of the most important ponies in the country.

3793806 Not what^^ Who^^ Yuri Lowell is the main character from a game called Tales of Vesperia and he grew up in a city which was pretty similar to Canterlot in some regards. There's the "Lower Quarter" where the "normal" people live and the "Royal Quarter" where Nobles, so people like MInt, reside and.... Yuri can't stand them for looking down on other people like they constantly do. And he makes them feel that as seen here at 07:00, here at 08:37 and here (scene lasts about 5 minutes) That guy he's talking to is the current Emperor. Just thought you should know that.
So yeah. I'm pretty sure he could show Mint the "error of her ways" ^^

Loving how you play Fleur in this.

And Mint is a bitch.

~Skeeter The Lurker

can't wait till the next update:twilightsheepish:

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holy s*** Skeeter I haven't seen you in a wail also i'm like'n the new avatar pic

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...The hell you talking about?

I've never left.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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not that you left It's just i haven't seen you in months

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...Er...

Have you been looking in the comments of many stories...?

~Skeeter The Lurker

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ya and i was quite used to seeing your comment in random fics that I read but after seeing your comment I realized I haven't seen one in a few months

Heh... Nice name. Hood Rat, it's fitting.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I fucking like this fic now.:rainbowkiss:
If I hadn't made that clear before.

And the transformation starts. Where does the character end and the pony begin? That will become the question.

although it must have been made to look shabbily-made for whatever performance mumsy wore it for,

Wait, how does she not recognize a Clover the Clever costume? :rainbowhuh:

Also, I bet Rarity will recognize her anyway. :raritywink:

I'm half expecting Pinkie to just know it's the same pony from earlier somehow.

Seems very Batman inspired

I think I see a problem with Fleur's plan... By putting on a persona, wouldn't Pinkie fall in love with the persona itself instead of the pony behind it? :applejackunsure: Tread carefully, Fleur de Lis...

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