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Priestess Kyoko


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Returning from Rarity's generously donated job, Coco Pommel is eager to learn under the wing of Ponyville's esteemed designer and her timing couldn't be better. With Canterlot's yearly fashion show and the Grand Galloping Gala right around the corner, Rarity is called to design a eye-catching line for young starlet, Rose Blossom.
Ivory Tower, Rose's manager, runs every minute of her life, and her mother Red Velvet makes sure her daughter is perfect for every photo shoot, public appearance, and cat-walk. Rose's sister, Fleur De Lis, attempts to balance her life and relationship with Fancy Pants with helping her little sister get through each day in one piece.
With such luxury constantly around every corner Rose barely has time for anything but work, but when Coco begins to notice that Rose is anything but the happy, privileged celebrity that everyone thinks she is, Coco unknowingly comes to the rescue with the companionship Rose so desperately needs.
However, friendship can only help so much when you are forced down the wrong path. Rose needs more than just a friend, and what she wants may end up costing her everything.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 9 )

"Look, I've had this done so many times, I know my measurements. Just let me tell you, going through it again is just ridiculous."

Dun-DUN-DUNNNNNN :pinkiegasp:

simple reply of "Glad to help."

Aahh nope, thats not a simle reply, he shouldve said "Eeyup"

So far, so good, keep it up

Interesting fic. I love Coco, so seeing more of her is good. Hope you continue working on this fic.

"She excused herself for a moment, she needed to fix her mane." Fleur said nonchalantly as she sipped from her glass.
"Ivory can you go help her? This is her first party as the main attraction and I need her perfect." Red Velvet nearly spilled her drink as she gestured across the room, causing her levitating glass to kick forward slightly.
"She excused herself for a moment, she needed to fix her mane." Fleur said nonchalantly as she sipped from her glass.
"Ivory, could you help her? This is her first party as the main attraction and I need her perfect for her clientele." Red Velvet nearly spilled her drink as she gestured across the room, causing her levitating glass to kick forward slightly.

Dejavu with correction:pinkiehappy:

4577364 Thanks for pointing that out :) Fixing~ must have happened between copy/pasting, I always write using wordpad before posting to the site.
As for the delay in posting, I apologize to the few who favorited the initial posting. I've had some family issues that kept me from writing much. I'm back into regular time schedule so I'll be posting new chapters to both of my stories more often now, thank you for bearing with me.

So far so good. Waiting to see what will happen.

"It's just his behavior recently. He's been spending a lot of time and money at the derby track. She thinks he may have a problem."

Gambling, I bet:ajsleepy:. *eye roll*

"You what?!" Fleur's voice came from through the door. Rose to suddenly jumped from her seat and rushed towards the door, causing Coco to jump slightly at her sudden movement. "On one race?! Fancy that's a small fortune!"

"I knew it." Rose growled as she listened to the conversation through the door. "He's at it again."

"It was a sure thing, Fleetfoot had the highest odds."

Betting on the Wonderbolt race hm:ajsmug:?

"How much longer are you going to do this to her? Do us a favor and get some help or leave her alone. Fleur's too kind for this to be happening to her." Rose nearly snarled her words as she backed Fancy against the wall, using her height to her advantage to intimidate the slightly taller stallion.

If I were Rose, I'd ask Fancy to just leave Fleur alone:ajbemused:. He clearly has no idea how much he's hurting her:facehoof:.

An excellent story. It looked like it was building quite the ship for Coco and Rose and had a buttload of intrigue and drama on the side. It’s just a shame it hasn’t been updated in a while

I’m not holding out much hope, but I really do wish we get to see a conclusion for this story. I would really love to see everyone have their happy ending.

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