This is a story about a new pony who moves to ponyville in search of a change of scenenary but ends p getting lost in the everfree forest, when he escapes he sees that there is a big snow storm in ponyville. Will there be a way for him to get to safety?
fc09.deviantart.net/fs23/f/2009/247/9/d/The_Cake_is_a_Lie_wallpaper_by_DEVILUSHNINJA.png That portal reference...
Uhh... hmm... look, I want to say something nice, but this is so like random and haphazard.
3677742 yup! If you look at the tag it clearly states that it is random. And at the end there should be authros notes stating this was thrown together last minutes
3677622 I tried :3
I don't think it's random, actually. Could use the fixed errors, and some desperately-needed suspension but overall, it isn't half bad. You put the effort in well, you took a crack at it and it wasn't an atrocity, so good work man.
0:4 upvote-downvote ratio is a bad thing. Will balance with 1:4.
3679168 ...Fuck it! 2:4
3679168 woo :D thanks!
I know i didnt mean for this story to be a serious one it was just something i took a crack at.
3680390 :D thanks
Loved the Portal reference!!!
3682174 yay :D
I would love to give it a read