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Starswirl's only interests are studying magic and practicing magic. A young Celestia tries to change this by offering her hoof in friendship to the younger pony. Can she get him to feel the magic of friendship?
An idea I had to write for When they were young
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If this is incomplete then why does it say "The End"?
This is a good story, certainly nice to see more of young Celestia and Luna.
3733065 Ah... because I didn't know it went through yet. I'll mark it as complete now.
Eh. It was OK. Try to write even more on the chapter.
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3741992 Do you mean I should be more descriptive or I should show Celestia making attempts at friendship multiple times?
No, I just meant that the chapter felt a little short. Sorry for any confusion.
3746009 It's fine, I just wanted to clarify. Thank you for your feedback.