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Scootaloo saw the signs, but she couldn't actually believe it.

She will never fly.

How can she become like her idol, her hero, her ... sister? The fact is, she won't. Her dreams have become unreachable, in more ways than one.
Rainbow Dash knows in her heart that her young friend can achieve greatness. Wings aren't everything. Scootaloo may learn she never needed them at all.
Although Rainbow Dash knows Scotaloo will never fly, can see teach her how to soar?


Original vector by KyssS90
Proof read by BunnyAsylum1690

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

There's a couple of typos, but I don't mind - the premise is cool. I wonder what'll Scoot do.

At first, when I was reading, it reminded me of BrBa - Scootaisenberg realises she can cook crystal after the fateful visit to a doctor. :trollestia:

I hope Rainbow redeems herself in Scoot's eyes.

I guess Twilight wouldn't be a good pony for :scootangel: to look up to - she couldn't fly, then she became a princess. Chances of Scootaloo getting the same transformation won't brighten her mood. Fluttershy is a weak flyer, but in the end she can fly, and doesn't do it often. I think that would piss Scoots off. So I guess it's up to Dash to show our favorite orange pegasus that she is awesome. Sure, she kind of did in Flight to the Finish, but now in this fic this issue has returned, and it's much bigger.

:rainbowkiss: Moar.

Crap.

There are too many good stories I'm following I can't keep up with all of 'em! Now I gotta follow another one...? Oh well, it's worth it. I haven't been really exercising the RD part of my fanfic brain anyway. Plus, it's made by this gal right here! :raritywink:

I really liked this! Premise is welcoming, pacing is just right, and the execution is fantastic! Now, how will this all turn out in the end for Scoots...?

Moar please. :heart:

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You should go look for Ask Snowflake. Great story with a lot of great headcanon in there. :pinkiesmile:

3886479 I know how you feel. This is a really awesome story! I hope you update soon; I want to find out what RD does.

Excellent start.i do hope to see more chapters in the future.

This fic deserves a fav

4078136 Yes, in due course. I'm writing an update for another story, but this will be next in line. :twilightsheepish:

Fantastic Beasts and where to find them?:pinkiehappy: I waited for this referance forever, and you made it happen!:rainbowkiss:

This is a pretty neat start! You should, however, get yourself an editor. You made some minor mistakes.
But all in all, this is really great!:twilightsmile:

I like this, I can't wait....:pinkiehappy:

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I think that cancelled tag says other wise

I know this is cancelled, but after seeing more than one fic where the solution was for Scootaloo to fly with her spine vertical, thus making the thrust she developed on her scooter act as lift, I have to wonder why nopony considered the idea of Rainbow Dash teaching her to fly upside-down.

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