This story is a sequel to The Element of Honor
It's been five years since Sombra was defeated by The Elements of Freedom. Nexus can finally spend a normal Hearths Warming Eve with his family. This is placed after The Elements of Freedom series that at the moment is still a work in progress. If you want more on Nexus, then start with The Element of Honor and read on from there. Just click the prequel title. Yeah not a long description but it's a one shot so don't look at me with that tone of voice.
Cover Art made by: Shellythewolf1 (AKA Hoodwink)
Chapters (1)
It was okay
have a potato (:)
:moustache
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This kind of stuff isn't usually my forte`.
Thanks.
You are welcome
You tried your best and you will learn more about this Do not worry about it
Honestly i dont plan on writing another like this. Like the description says . Its a one shot christmas fic so its not meant to be amaazing. Its just festive.3668873
Good to know also
are you Roman Bellic
3669666 no
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I figured
Just joking
3671292 I'm gonna level with ya. I forgot that useless f
ks name and then I checked.
3671350 I know
EVERY FUCKING TIME
he wants to go bowling even when I am getting chased by the cops No RoMan I am busy
I hung out a few times with him but only because he was annoying the shit out of me and so I can get free taxi rides
POOR NIKO
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Okay
Also you can seem like a cool person
3671385 I either come off as an ass hole or funny. So i guess you hit the ladder.
3671448 Maybe asshole funny?
3671454 I always say i'm the nicest ass hole you'll ever meet.
Sweet
3672810 So what are some down sides of Nexus' Hearth's Warming? Always open to critiques.
Honestly I am not good at these things but here we go: the flow was okay when I was reading it I felt it did not go off the boat but I noticed some errors I think
3675103 gramatic, spelling, plot? answer me man!
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Okay I will give one Plot. It was okay but it can be a little better
3676189 i thought so too, but it's just a two day thing with a small set of characters in their normal life. not killing creatures of Tartarus, not defeating evil, just their normal life. i thought it would be good to show a bit more of Nexus' non military side and give Dust Strom some much needed screen time as well.
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Good
3676202 I am surprised that you are replying to my comments. It is not bad but I am surprised that is all.
3676471 I'm a small time writer on winter break durring their senior year of high school. you think i have anything better to do today?
3676473 I did not know
3676473 and thanks for answering my question
3676503 Any time. Stay Brony my friend.
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You too
Also I wonder what would happen if Trevor from GTA 5 lands in Equestria?
3676520 kill s
t, get money?
3682291 Exactly
Trevor being Trevor and believing the government is after him.
Remember this Do not fuck with Trevor ever. 2. Do not joke about him being Canadian. He is a redneck Canadian