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Path_of_cloud


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This is going to be a hell of a ride. It's already early and I'm raising the bar this high :pinkiecrazy:

3660028 Go back to work on your other stories and continue this one too, NOAH!

3660066 Alright, you are granted a few hours of sleep, then go back to it slave!

Another awesome chapter from the great Path_of_cloud. 7 mares and a gryphoness? Spike is gonna get seriously laid in this story.

It's finally here, and it's off to an amazing start! Well worth the wait Cloud, this is going to be one hell of a ride I can already tell. Looking forward to the next installment.:pinkiehappy:



P.s. to those of you who downvoted: Get out.

Okay, I admit, at first I was unsure about the idea of Spike being compelled by his nature to seek out more mares for his hoard, and the way Celestia explained it to him. Like Spike himself said, it felt a little too wish fulfillment in concept. However, the way you've presented it here, with him having to earn their love and devotion - especially with how Applejack presented her and RD's hurdle and with Fluttershy's fear of full grown dragons possibly coming to the fore as she learns about the more primal behaviors - it's going to be a long, hard, enjoyable...read. ...what did you think I was going to say?

And is it odd I can see the conversation between Twilight and Pinkie going thusly?
:twilightsheepish:Hi Pinkie!
:pinkiehappy: Hey Twilight! How's riding the scaly purple love machine going for you?
:twilightoops: Wha-what?
:pinkiehappy: Come on, Twilight. It's obvious you and Rarity both got your hands on him, and I saw how he's been looking around despite being loyal. So how big's the herd going to get, and when's my turn?
:twilightoops: Ah...buh...wah...
:pinkiesmile: Come on, silly. Did you really think I'd be as flirtatious as I'd been with him when I saw him in that apron if all I wanted was a free ride? He's like one of my bestest best friends, and if you can't give your heart and body to your bestest best friends, who can you? Besides, I could never be with someone if it would separate me from you girls!
:twilightoops: ... ... ...
:twilightblush: Pinkie...

Wait, how come this is a sequel if "The Conquests of a Dragon"´s descriptions sais it´s a sequel as well, or does this mean that you no longer will consider that as part of the story?. I mean, not that I'm complaining, this looks to have great potential, I'm just curious of what will happen to the other story

Great:pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::moustache: Please add Zecora.

While I'm a fan of the alternate chapter, I'm reading this in the hopes of seeing more kinkyness, humiliation and domination like in 'a weekend maid for Spike':ajsmug:

there will be a gilda??:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

This is going to be good. :yay:

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I don't think this can possibly end well.

The logistics of a successful harem are nightmarish at best, and a failed harem is just awkward.

Of course that's trying to apply reality to a fictional story about anthropomorphic ponies (Pinkie Pie looks especially cute).

I just, I have no idea :facehoof: I feel like this a derailed train and you'd better hang on tight through the nerve-wracking sound of screeching metal to avoid getting thrown off.

This may stem from my bad (or at least unsatisfying in a sense other than comedy) experience concerning both Spike fics and Harem fics in general here...

But I think the coverart is worth holding onto my hat and peeking inside anyway, huzzah.

You know what would be really cool to see? If one of them said... "No."

I mean, admit it, these harem stories are a dime a dozen, and they all have the same plot: convince your best friends to bone you. They always end the same way: massive Mane Six orgy. I realize that this is a clopfic, so the point is for sexy times, but from a thematic standpoint, it'd be really interesting to see one of them turn down the offer because, well... "I'm not bisexual," or, "I just don;t love you guys like that." Having them fail in their mission would be very cool to see. If for nothing else, it'd be a new and fresh take on a stale formula.

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That's a pretty good point. I support this. :moustache:

I won't lie, I was hoping for another Punishment Game update, but this pretty dang golden nevertheless

Impressive as always.:pinkiehappy: What do you expect the time between chapters to be?

This is going to be a lot of fun. I can tell that you want to put in Zecora and Gilda, but will we see other ponies as well like Trixie? I also have to say, it's interesting to see Big Mac is also gaining a "horde" of his own.

3660225 Spike's such a downed :trollestia: That's actually pretty funny. I haven't actually decided if I want to do that scene or not. :unsuresweetie:

3660290 Trilogy: Weekend<Hoard<Conquest

3660320>>3661177>>3660469 I don't tag for one-time appearances or support character :raritywink:

3660407 Mmh, yes. There will be that.

3660654 I never was very good at making thing easy.

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Then you have my attention, my good sir :moustache:

3661348 3661459 At any one time, I have six active stories and I tend to shuffle through them on updates.


3661584 Not Trixie. Mac is important.

3661787 Oh, so she's part of Mac's horde huh? Interesting and makes sense since TrixMac is one of the few Trixie hetero shippings.

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they both are sequels in the series this one takes place right after weekend, while conquest say in the description it takes place year later after weekend that's why it went on hiatus so he could do this one first since it take place before hand, because if you notice in the chapter it mentions about his hoard but is not specific who was in it just that rarity has already shared spike. plus since conquest features the cmc we'll probably need to know how RD and applejack join before he adds more since it was both rarity and sweetie belle, so i hazard it a guess it'll feature the other two's idol/ big sister to help

3661967 You deserve a :moustache:

This is all 100% correct! /brohoof

3661983
woo brohoof. though after I commented I noticed conquest tagged and in the mini desctipiton It mentioned Rainbow Dash lol. :twilightblush:

alright, so it's a trilogy. I just want to say one more thing. Please don't stop working on "The Punishment Game" I know you like to work on different stories at once and that's ok, I really
love your work and the waiting is totally worth it, you never disapoint me, I would just hate to see it go on hiatus as well, I couldn't reseast reading the first chapter and now I can't wait for the next one :rainbowkiss:

That's all, thank you :twilightsmile:

3662068 Conquest is only on Hiatus as it's impossible, well, improbable to write a chapter that would be missing a lot of important information gained here.

*Me at cover image.*

All those beautiful plots...:coolphoto:

And my eyes aren't able to keep themselves from Gummy.:pinkiecrazy:

a sequel...YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES

3662109 Photobombing Gummy!

3662140 I started seeing eyes eyes eyes at some point...

3662279 Or Protective Gummy simply telling you "back off"...:pinkiecrazy:

Look like another good story though I wonder how you're going to get a Glida in the harem without it feeling like she was shoehorned in.

3662279 im confused wich comes this or conquest or are they sequels to a weekend maid but gone into different directions one where he gets the main 6 and one where he gets the cmc

I've read your first story, and it was pretty good,
So for this one, the sequel,
You've peaked my interests, and have gained my attention..........................................
For now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:trixieshiftright::twilightblush:

3662719 Gilda, Gilda's storyline is mmh.

Let's just say, everyone wants to taste the rainbow :rainbowwild:

3662721 Weekend happens and this story starts the day after Weekend ends, but it'll span considerably further, and Conquest is years after Hoard and Weekend.

3662796 than why is the pairing RarityXSpikexCMCXRainbow Dash did the others leave the herd or they just aren't mentioned

3662812 They'll be mentioned and make appearance in Conquest in time, they simply aren't tagged as they aren't main characters to that story.

I don't have much time, so I will just add this to my Fav;s and read what I know will be a good fic later.

~Hearn

3663326 Nice to see you never rest.

3663328
That is only due to your dark magics. You will regret trapping my soul as an undead minion. Someday I shall be your destruction!

Every time I see the phase, 'double dragon' I can't help but chuckle to myself.:twilightsheepish:

Great chapter Path_of_cloud. Truly raised that bar high for yourself and others. Again.:ajsmug:

Even with how hot and passionate the sex is with Rarity, Spike and now Twilight. I'm really looking forward to the challenge Rainbow will begin.:rainbowdetermined2: Goodluck Spike!:moustache::twilightsheepish::raritywink:

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