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Path_of_cloud


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I assumed it would be much longer with Shimmering's edits...Lol

Edit: This story was really good! the sex scene was very well written.

Really liked this, it felt like something I could certainly see being a thing in Equestria (I mean using magic for Roleplay certainly can't be out of the question), and as usual Spike and Rarity come off as genuinely loving while also being extremely hot,

This was wonderful! Excellent job!

And that line towards the end...dare I hope there might be more Spike and Rarity roleplaying stories coming? Any number of possibilities are available given what Rarity can do with outfits.

Of course, now I have a mental image of other enchanted comics that aren't Power Ponies, and what might happen if they opened those up.

Got to admit I almost did a backflip when i saw you put out a new story. And then i did when i saw that it was in the storyline of my by far fav Spike x Rar couple:raritywink:. I always enjoy your work and this is no exemption to that rule.Can't wait to see some of your other stories continue as well but this was a great story to tied me over till you do more updates. Keep up the great work and I'll always be here ready to read it.:moustache:

3931633 I know i would love to see them do some crazy role plays all over town lol. Just think the outfits, sex, and the thrill of almost being caught in places they shouldn't even be in. Can you say AWESOME!!!!! lol.:moustache:
My first one i can think of is the Library (naughty librarian getting punished) yum :raritystarry:

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Another that might be good is doctor and nurse physical examination...only to nearly get caught in the exam room by Redheart. Only problem with that one is I recently did a google search and couldn't find one good pic of anthro Rarity in a nurse outfit.

3931508 With how long it took him :rainbowlaugh:

3931624 :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: I got some magic for you. :rainbowkiss: Appreciate the kind words. :raritywink:

3931633 Roleplay is kind of Rarity's thing, expect quite a bit more in Hoard.

3931789 Way to remind me I have to get back to work :pinkiecrazy:

3931806 Hand out of the cookie jar!

3931839 You'd be amazed how many outfits don't exist for Anthro Rarity. Hell, before I came around there were no maid ones.

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Any chance that mean we'll be seeing more?

3931916 Lol what can I say I am a motivator lol. I tend to always have my hand in the cookie jar :pinkiehappy:. I almost forgot I have to give you the biggest THANK YOU I can give, thanks to your story my girl was my "Maid" for my week off. Needless to say it was a great week lol.:moustache:. I wonder and you don't have to share, are we going to see the rest of the CMC join Spike and Rar on their little game?:trixieshiftright:

3932014 Eventually, but it's going to be down the line.

You know, that isn't even the first dozen times I've heard something along those lines.

3932040 lol you got added to our collection right next to Nana to Kaoru :moustache:.

3932048 Ah, nothing like a little "breather."

3932056 Aaaaand just like that you got 20% cooler. :rainbowlaugh:

There should be a spinoff series called The Sexual Adventures of Humdrum and Radiance.

Seriously, Cloud, Every time I read your stories, they just show that Clop can be beatiuful and arousing at the same time. Good on ya, mate.

3931916 Lol One of the best editors I've ever worked with... Also a bitch to get to sit still long enough to make him edit. :rainbowlaugh:

I kid Shimmering, I love ya'.:ajsmug::rainbowwild:

Well, looks like you gave me a little more!

The Long Description:

... "to enjoy. An" - Replace the period with a colon.
... "an adult only rating." - Place a hyphen between "adult" and "only".
... "two, young superheroes" - Remove the comma.
... "A stand alone sequel" - "stand" and "alone" should be one word: "standalone".
... "tie-in to Building a Dragon." - THAT'S NOT THE TITLE! :flutterrage: C'mon, it's "Building a Dragon's Horde": It even links to it! :facehoof:

I guess what I'm trying to say is, I maaaaaaay be a liiiiiittle bit miffed about the whole "geekier still being in the story" thing... a little. j-just a little. :pinkiecrazy:

3932112 GET BACK TO WORK, CAWK SAWK! :flutterrage: Love 'ya too. :fluttershbad:

I would like that in another comic, the citizens of Maretropolis already have a pretty good belief that Humdrum and Radiance are a couple, not just partners.

Hell, I wouldn't be surprised in their world that there are tabloids saying they are dating.....and then some news-pegasi "just" happens to snap a few pictures of them in the throes of passion.....right there in Radiance's penthouse....even the cum-filled pussy kiss on the windshield. That would sell a lot of papers when that breaks!!!

........and neither of them would even care...:moustache::heart::raritywink:

Now to the story: Hell of a tale, Cloud!! Loving the Power Ponies setup, especially with the fighting scenes. And of course the debriefing afterward was top notch!! I truly enjoyed the scene where Spike/Humdrum is holding Rarity/Radiance in his arms as he flies the both of them to her penthouse after once again foiling evil for the sake of love and justice. Seriously, I would love to see an actual scene of this--the two of them flying over Maretropolis in the nighttime with the twinkle of stars and the lights of the skyscrapers on a clear night with a full moon. And personally for me, that leaving up to the very sensual lovemaking between the two was enhanced by the prospect of others seeing them (once again, I truly hope someponies did witness part of it, even if it's a secret, it's a hell of a good one :raritywink:)

I just put this in my favorites.

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heh, readin this got me t sudden urge to re-read t first one again :facehoof:; which of course isn't bad idea really :duck:. Anyways great fic as always :yay: n' can't wait to see any updates u got for t others :pinkiehappy:

If there was an adult section at Enchantting Comics, they'd be the most popular store on the planet.

Let me get this straight, this is not the sequel to the alternate ending, right?

3932086 :rainbowlaugh: That's all I got!

3932101 :twilightblush: You flatter me... I didn't say stop :trollestia: Honestly though, I really do love hearing things like that.

3932112 Truer words.

3932113 I wonder that myself quite a bit.

3932477 Just had to get in the last word :pinkiecrazy:

3932545 It's nice to hear that in every scene I manged to hit my points quite well. I just think it would be funnier if Zap or the masked Matterhorn were the ones flying by, and then right into a building :rainbowlaugh:

3932911 No good reason to regret anything :moustache:

3933173 :ajsmug: Well, I'm glad you're rereading Weekend while you wait.

3933211 They totally would be :eeyup:

3933261 This is basically a strictly Sparity piece that doesn't even mention the herd, so basically it is a little one shot sequel that works in both endings.

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:pinkiehappy: yah, i probally would hav done it anyways since some fics i read reminded me of a certain things :raritywink: somehow which then giv me t urge to re-read that fic or fics over again :twilightsmile:

3933826 Yes. Yes I did. :rainbowwild:

... You forgot the comma between "two" and "young". :trollestia: It really SHOULD be removed, consider this: "Three Little Pigs"; no comma. :derpytongue2:

Man this is awesome i srsly loved it and you've earned a sketch! :heart:

3934092 Thee Little Pigs lacks a comma because it's a title of a childrens story. Normally, a comma goes between any words that describe the same thing; such as: the number, the shape, the color, or the age.

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:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

To be honest, my thinking is that if Matterhorn/Twilight didn't know, or at least saw this coming, then obviously Zapp/Rainbow Dash would be the one to "accidentally" view Humdrum and Radiance's tryst. And basically, if she knew, even in secret, then within a week the entire metropolis would know.:twilightblush:

Of course, there would be the complementary facehoof plant into a neighboring skyscraper that proves how much of a voyeur Rainbow Dash is...:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:...Good addition, Path.

Holy crap. Everytime you post something you amaze me. Seriously that was very good and very riveting. :pinkiegasp: You get better and better with the love making scenes. Worth the wait but leaves a viewer wanting for more. Fav'd. :twilightsmile:

What is with Rarity and role-playing these days?:rainbowlaugh:

i count 8 comic book references nice job man

also ps dude make a sequel to this after the hoard thing is done were Spike and the crew return to the world and Spike must save them all from some villian then comece a super orgy

Another story another feature. Thanks for letting me take part in this little ol' legacy you're making for yourself. It's an honour, sir:moustache:.

3934355 :raritystarry: :moustache::heart::raritywink: I knew you'd enjoy this.

3934822 It's all part of the evil plan :trollestia: Now if I could just get a Discord emoticon...

3935518 I think she said it best herself, Clothes, acting, and sex. Girl knows what she likes.

3936594 I'm more curious if you, or anyone for that matter, figured out who Mane Brane is based on.

3936847 You make my words sound like English! :moustache:

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Yah see PoC? I toldja!

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Also, English sounding is shimmering's domain. Comparatively I'm not even sure why you have us both run through it.

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