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And so it begins...
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And does it ever...
~Skeeter The Lurker
Oh my this looks like it will be fun.
Oh gods, I can't wait for more. That was so fucking hot. How long till the next chapter?
Wow, the synopsis doesn't do this enough justice. You're gonna hook quite a few with this one Cloud. Let the updates begin!!!!
Aaaaaaand favorited Looking forward to more.
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This shall be interesting :3
I await more, though I do hope that the AppleDashing slows down a bit, nothing wrong with the pairing, just not my cup of tea, old bean
Awwww C'mon, another chapter please?
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From the looks of this if any of the mane six ships and their spike counterparts irk you then this story is not going to be your cup of tea.
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Bravo on another interest rising story mate. (The pun was highlighted for the ones who can't handle subtlety.)
3586888 That's hilarious XD
I've read POC's Harem fics, I know what to expect! I'm more or less un irkkable, I was just voicing my opinion, AppleDash (no offense to anyone who really likes it) is just so generic, I'm all for a dip of some rainbows and apples, but too much will ruin my pearly white smile.
Long story short, I love all ships, I really love certain ones, and I can't wait to see what else Cloud's got planned :3 Just seems like such a waist to focus too much on AppleDash when there's so many more formulas to brew in this devil's concoction!
This going to be good.
I hope there will come more of it. Looks very nice.
All of my yes.
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Thanks I tend to write lighthearted stuff most of the time... well usually anyways. So jokes are easy to come by, though from the look of this story there's much more to cum if Pinkie has her way... never thought she'd be so deviant. (Puns once again highlighted for those who cannot read subtlety.)
Man. You are a freaking genius!
It's so sexy and yet so funny. I was laughing blushes the whole chapter. One time I was even striped red and white as the color fled my face and at the same time I was blushing furiously. How's that even possible?!?!?
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Wow, ok Spike your in for it more ways than one. No doubt about that
She stood with her arms crossed and her back against the wall showing off how the years of hard work on her farm had given her an impressively muscular, although not huge, and very attractive figure. “Can’t believe that fire breath of yars still amazes me every time, after all these years.”
Yars......
YYYYARG!!!!!
Lol is she cowpony pirate girl? She is sooo many things.
For some odd reason, I find myself hating that there are no more chapters other then this one currently... PLEASE! the waiting is killing me!
Oh yeah...
Keep going, dude!
3586775 I was not expecting you here, Mr Staff Sargeant.
Sorry, Rainbow
It's about damn time, Path!! We were looking for this for about one-and-a-half years!!! Instant favorite!!!
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The corpirate comes to Equestria.
To relax in yargaritaville for vacation.
hhhhhmmmmm? so there all virgins ..............
....for now
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if this doesn't turn into a mane six cluster fuck I will kick my self in the nuts so hard ill go from t rex to
t rachel
While I love your Sparity and you're a really good writer, I dislike it whenever you feel the need to take several paragraphs describing how cool Spike actually is and about how he could totally get every mare he wanted.
I'm a really big AppleDash fan but I don't use every story to tell people about how their relationship is the envy of those around them and how they are so special
oh i definately can't wait to read more of this
this is going to be so fucking awesome
I love the AppleDash in this story! I hope for more. Haha. Update?
~GalaxyDust
3588095 You have to always describe your character, and I'm fighting an uphill battle usually to show off Spike's particular traits that each mare has a thing for. Of course, I usually offshot his "coolness," by giving him some very realistic self-doubt about his character and his place as the only "civilized," dragon in Equestria.
I hope there is a new chapter soon. I love this story :3
3586580 We both know there's no good answer to that.
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3586812 When the hell did I become British?
3586888 It's a penis joke,
3587120 That sounds like a Pinkie Pie level feat.
3587239 Fixed that. It's strange I had one line with the southern accent written out
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3588336 A better question would be when did you STOP becoming British?
Great story Cloud, very funny and very good indeed! i give it a 9 1/2 out of 10 will give a 10 later though XD can't wait for the next chapter!
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But it also has the effect of making it seem somewhat, cliché, you know?
The 'cool' guy is the only one doubting himself and everyone else immediately comforts him and makes sure he realises that he's cool.
I think that part of the difficulty is is that your Spike is totally different from canon, as in that's it a possible form/personality Spike will grow in. That makes people wary about him.
I can't wait for updates, this has definitely got my attention.
Also does anyone else find themselves wanting to try this game at some point?
Oh bloody fantastic, another great story that I'll have to wait anxiously to get updated
Seriously, the time between the updates are like a holiday.
Like Christmas, I know it's gonna be great & when it's here I'm loving it, but when it's over I'll know I wont see it for a long time.
Yes, I just compared your stories to Christmas.
3588659 Someone who finally understands!
Glad to see it make the Feature list Cloud, I was there first hand to see how much effort you put into getting this story up and going, Yah deserve it bro.
dude I never thought you pull of making a story more teasing and sexy the A weekend maid for Spike but hot dam
3586454 Please---------MOAR!
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When ya think next one be done???
I get excited!!!
Um um um SHWING nuff said
MOAR PLEASE!!!
Apparently everything you write turns to gold. You know the drill, moar yadda yadda yadda