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MrWriterWriter


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Spike you are one lucky bastard! Or unlucky depending on your pointbof view:rainbowlaugh:

Go for Rainbow Dash, next bro! She looks like she needs some serious attention.

Rainbow and make her squeal

Hot chapter, like the previous one, but my vote is on Rainbow Dash. From what Spike said about her in the first chapter, seems like she's REALLY pent up and needs relief.

I would not be surprised if she is so stressed and pent up that it won't take much effort just to make her cum. Constantly and repeatedly. Hell, I'll bet that by the time Spike is done himself, Dash would most likely be a twitching orgasmic wreck (or pretty much in a sex induced coma) for the next few hours at MINIMUM.

Unless you have something else in mind.

I vote for Shy--I have a feeling she and Rares are like sisters, so it would be appropriate for the other beauiful supermodel to be next. Thought it wouldn't be a bad idea for Dash and Shy would be a bit of a package deal

I'm loving this setup.

Next should be Apple jack, though I believe I am out voted for shy or dash.

Make Dash a needy little submissive

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I'm going to say lucky, that includes Rarity. What I wouldn't give to be in his shoes though. :pinkiehappy:

S-succubus..?

You grabbed my full attention the second I laid eyes on this story! :pinkiehappy:

Rainbow is in desperate need by now.

I have a feeling Rainbow Dash will be next, judging from most of the comments already made here. And honestly, I dunno how she would act, either she would take charge (which I like), or she'll be on the receiving/submissive side.

I'm hoping that there's at least one mare who decides to take the reins and Spike gets to be on the bottom (femdom ftw, bois.)

"A-anyway, like I was saying. From now on, Spike, you have a new job: to help ensure Ponyville's new succubi don't fall prey to their hunger, as well as keep them fed...personally."

Normally, this sounds like any guy's dream comes true. But somehow I feel pity for Spike. Do we need the help from the Princess of Love in this case?

One advice for you, Spike. DO.NOT.LET.SHINING.HEAR.ANYTHING.ABOUT.THIS.

"Twilight? It's Rarity....Yes, he just left. He should be there shortly....Oh, it was satisfying in more ways than one!" She giggled. "Indeed! Whoever thought being changed by an ancient artifact could actually improve my life like this....You and me both. Anyway, I just thought I'd let you know...Oh, and Twilight? Thanks for putting me at the top of the list."

Why it sounded like she bribed Twilight to jump the queue or something?

Where has this story been, and how did I miss it!?:twilightoops:

Oh well. Good luck, Spike, and have fun!:moustache:

That's hot! Great job!:moustache:

Fluttershy! And show her ONLY wearing Spike's shirt when he arrives!:trollestia:
Because we all know she has it! Damn sexy, kinky quiet girls!:moustache::yay:

*snrk*
Lingerie Catolog

It's been nearly an hour and I'm still laughing

A Spike story involving the mane 6 becoming Succubi and Lead Harem & Vice lead are Twilight & Rarity. Once again MrWriterWriter, thank you. :heart: :twilightsmile: :raritywink: :heart:

Cool, this story hit the feature box.

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well, does it count that Rarity rode him cowgirl style?

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Y'know what? Why not, I'll count it.
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Yeah, you're probably right. It's always the quiet ones. :trixieshiftright:

Is this going to affect spikes greed?

You never disappoint.

two things, one Dashie next, and two is that AJ in the story picture

I would trade places with him in a second. There are legit ways to ensure a succubus isn't ALLOWED to drain you completely. Also, Celestia's knowledge of Ogre and Oubliettes, and there for DnD, alludes to her age. Boredom sure can set in after a few centuries and one tends to look for avenues of entertainment outside of the norm. She was probably there when O&O was created, probably helped with some of the character, creature and ability designs, not to mention arms and armor, classes, and the Deities.

In order, also counting the ones that already got their doses.

Twilight
Rarity
Fluttershy
Applejack
Rainbow
Pinkie

Save Pinkie for last cause we all know she's got one HELL of a Kink Streak in her and that's probably gonna be the longest chapter, bar non.

Rainbow but she is on bottom

WOW! So many votes for Rainbow Dash. Personally, my vote is for Pinkie. I just hope Fluttershy is saved for last.

"Well, they tend to lean towards neutral evil with the occasional chaotic neutral." He began counting off things. "Normally a CR of three to four with the regular ones, but Queen Succubi can be up CR seven-point-five. They all have a speed of about thirty with double that in flight. Ninety for Queens. A natural advantage on persuasion, deception, and insight checks, and can perform a roll for seduction once every four hours. Most are enchanters and illusionists, so strength is fairly below average, relying more on charisma and intelligence, though their flight gives them a dexterity boost."

You had me interested, but, this here, the makes me give the thumbs up regardless of what else happens.

Twilight's foreplay involves making a list... this is brilliant and hilarious. Can't believe I've never seen or thought of that before. lol

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That's why I call her Kinky Pinkie sometimes. :pinkiecrazy:

"Well, they tend to lean towards neutral evil with the occasional chaotic neutral." He began counting off things. "Normally a CR of three to four with the regular ones, but Queen Succubi can be up CR seven-point-five. They all have a speed of about thirty with double that in flight. Ninety for Queens. A natural advantage on persuasion, deception, and insight checks, and can perform a roll for seduction once every four hours. Most are enchanters and illusionists, so strength is fairly below average, relying more on charisma and intelligence, though their flight gives them a dexterity boost."

At first I was confused as hell, especially since it's usually OoC for Spike to answer like this; that's more Twilight's forte.

Then I realized he's talking about Ogres and Oubliettes, and everything suddenly became funny. :rainbowlaugh:

"In a way. More like a strange sense of humor and balance. While the girls used them for what was considered an honorable end, and I AM grateful that my little sister is back, they were deemed a bit on the prudish and uptight side. So, the Elements infused them with Succubus energy to balance it out."

Should I make a snarky remark about how this would, from a certain point of view, make the Elements intolerant hypersexuals which can't accept ponies for who they are? :scootangel:

"Feed...? You mean...?" Spike squeaked in alarm when what she meant dawned on him, "M-ME?"

Yes, Spike. :pinkiecrazy:

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Kinky Pinkie has kinky sense? Sounds fitting.
Hold up! What about Fluttershy then? Will her 'Stare' get upgrade alongside her succubus power?

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