Hot chapter, like the previous one, but my vote is on Rainbow Dash. From what Spike said about her in the first chapter, seems like she's REALLY pent up and needs relief.
I would not be surprised if she is so stressed and pent up that it won't take much effort just to make her cum. Constantly and repeatedly. Hell, I'll bet that by the time Spike is done himself, Dash would most likely be a twitching orgasmic wreck (or pretty much in a sex induced coma) for the next few hours at MINIMUM.
I vote for Shy--I have a feeling she and Rares are like sisters, so it would be appropriate for the other beauiful supermodel to be next. Thought it wouldn't be a bad idea for Dash and Shy would be a bit of a package deal
I have a feeling Rainbow Dash will be next, judging from most of the comments already made here. And honestly, I dunno how she would act, either she would take charge (which I like), or she'll be on the receiving/submissive side.
I'm hoping that there's at least one mare who decides to take the reins and Spike gets to be on the bottom (femdom ftw, bois.)
"Twilight? It's Rarity....Yes, he just left. He should be there shortly....Oh, it was satisfying in more ways than one!" She giggled. "Indeed! Whoever thought being changed by an ancient artifact could actually improve my life like this....You and me both. Anyway, I just thought I'd let you know...Oh, and Twilight? Thanks for putting me at the top of the list."
Why it sounded like she bribed Twilight to jump the queue or something?
9633715 9634135 Kinky Pinkie has kinky sense? Sounds fitting. Hold up! What about Fluttershy then? Will her 'Stare' get upgrade alongside her succubus power?
As usual solid writing, but I will say the sex scenes feel a lot shorter than most of the others I recall you writing. I for one would like to see some expansion on them.
I'd definitely appreciate some more detail in the sex scenes. A bit too short in this one, more description is part and parcel to making a lemon like this so interesting.
personal opinion, this didnt need to be anthro doesnt detract from it either mind you
however is hould also point out that if not for the tag and a few vauge hints here and there in chapter one i would not have even realized it was just yet, you need to describe your charicters beter, you mentioned during your introduction to celestia what she was wearing but you didn't describe her body structure, long legs, veloptious breasts, wide hips ect ect things that would have furthered the notion that she was not a four leger
also muzzles, if it has a flat face (and its not a certain species of cat) its human, period you can gussy it up with anything else and if it doesnt have an animal face its human, or demi human not anthro
9637367 I am even more looking forward to seeing how Spike handle Big Mac (protective big brother) and Granny Smith (desperate grandma) when that happen.
BTW, thank you so much MrWriterWriter for giving us a desciption of Nightmare Rarity--so I'm thinking, the Mane 6 probably have their nightmare or discorded forms. I wonder what the forms for Applejack and Rainbow Dash would be thoguh--Twilight has Midnight Sparkle, Pinkie has Pinkamena, Flutters has her Flutterbat persona, and Rarity has her Nightmare persona. It's a bit of a mystery....
9654394 well, we got aj and flutters' succupony forms worked out, and kinda rainbow's. Pinkie...that's still in the works, along with a surprise extra.
Rainbow Dash!
Rainbow and make her squeal
Hot chapter, like the previous one, but my vote is on Rainbow Dash. From what Spike said about her in the first chapter, seems like she's REALLY pent up and needs relief.
I would not be surprised if she is so stressed and pent up that it won't take much effort just to make her cum. Constantly and repeatedly. Hell, I'll bet that by the time Spike is done himself, Dash would most likely be a twitching orgasmic wreck (or pretty much in a sex induced coma) for the next few hours at MINIMUM.
Unless you have something else in mind.
Dash or Shy.
I vote for Shy--I have a feeling she and Rares are like sisters, so it would be appropriate for the other beauiful supermodel to be next. Thought it wouldn't be a bad idea for Dash and Shy would be a bit of a package deal
nice work.
Next should be Apple jack, though I believe I am out voted for shy or dash.
Make Dash a needy little submissive
Save shy for last
Rainbow is in desperate need by now.
I have a feeling Rainbow Dash will be next, judging from most of the comments already made here. And honestly, I dunno how she would act, either she would take charge (which I like), or she'll be on the receiving/submissive side.
I'm hoping that there's at least one mare who decides to take the reins and Spike gets to be on the bottom (femdom ftw, bois.)
Why it sounded like she bribed Twilight to jump the queue or something?
Rainbow dash
Rainbow.
AJ next
Fluttershy! And show her ONLY wearing Spike's shirt when he arrives!
Because we all know she has it! Damn sexy, kinky quiet girls!
A Spike story involving the mane 6 becoming Succubi and Lead Harem & Vice lead are Twilight & Rarity. Once again MrWriterWriter, thank you.
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Cool, this story hit the feature box.
Rainbow
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well, does it count that Rarity rode him cowgirl style?
9632548
You know that will be flutters
Hum
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Y'know what? Why not, I'll count it.
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Yeah, you're probably right. It's always the quiet ones.
Is this going to affect spikes greed?
You never disappoint.
Rainbow Dash
two things, one Dashie next, and two is that AJ in the story picture
In order, also counting the ones that already got their doses.
Twilight
Rarity
Fluttershy
Applejack
Rainbow
Pinkie
Save Pinkie for last cause we all know she's got one HELL of a Kink Streak in her and that's probably gonna be the longest chapter, bar non.
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yep.
Rainbow but she is on bottom
WOW! So many votes for Rainbow Dash. Personally, my vote is for Pinkie. I just hope Fluttershy is saved for last.
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That's why I call her Kinky Pinkie sometimes.
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Kinky Pinkie has kinky sense? Sounds fitting.
Hold up! What about Fluttershy then? Will her 'Stare' get upgrade alongside her succubus power?
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Nice
Why not a 2 for 1 deal of Applejack and Rainbow Dash?
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I agree it's always the quiet ones that surprise you my vote goes to Fluttershy.
As usual solid writing, but I will say the sex scenes feel a lot shorter than most of the others I recall you writing. I for one would like to see some expansion on them.
I'd definitely appreciate some more detail in the sex scenes. A bit too short in this one, more description is part and parcel to making a lemon like this so interesting.
personal opinion, this didnt need to be anthro doesnt detract from it either mind you
however is hould also point out that if not for the tag and a few vauge hints here and there in chapter one i would not have even realized it was just yet, you need to describe your charicters beter, you mentioned during your introduction to celestia what she was wearing but you didn't describe her body structure, long legs, veloptious breasts, wide hips ect ect things that would have furthered the notion that she was not a four leger
also muzzles, if it has a flat face (and its not a certain species of cat) its human, period you can gussy it up with anything else and if it doesnt have an animal face its human, or demi human not anthro
do remember that.
I have a title idea when you get to Applejack.
Its gonna be "Plowing her fields"
😏
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I am even more looking forward to seeing how Spike handle Big Mac (protective big brother) and Granny Smith (desperate grandma) when that happen.
Flutters next and the title could be something like "It's always the quiet ones" or "A not so silent night"
Rainbow or AJ
Honestly I would say Pinkie Pie next.
BTW, thank you so much MrWriterWriter for giving us a desciption of Nightmare Rarity--so I'm thinking, the Mane 6 probably have their nightmare or discorded forms. I wonder what the forms for Applejack and Rainbow Dash would be thoguh--Twilight has Midnight Sparkle, Pinkie has Pinkamena, Flutters has her Flutterbat persona, and Rarity has her Nightmare persona. It's a bit of a mystery....
9654394
well, we got aj and flutters' succupony forms worked out, and kinda rainbow's. Pinkie...that's still in the works, along with a surprise extra.
Can I make fan art of this?
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sure, go ahead
That was a sweet/cute read l. But when did Twilight tell the others. My pick Applejack because I want to see the CMC reactions to all of this.