A chat with Celestia has Spike learning he's now got more in his job description than just 'Twilight's Assistant'
Ahh yes. Mare purring
"Wait, did you/I just p-purr...?"
Why Rainbow, ah never thought you would be a passionate one. It is nothing wrong to have a kinky side, darling. Y-you can join me next time... if you don't mind, that is.
Nice
It seems spike has found the sub of the group.
I'll take it as fluttershy would be the dom one
Still loving it! Sexy Dashie is a win!
If Dashie is the sub. Then it is very likely that Fluttershy is the dom of the group
feeling the air with shrieks - filling the airhe let out a squealing wail as her orgasm in, -orgasm hit
Welp, that was pretty damn hot. Love how Dash handles her transformation.
Awesome (as usual)
Man it always ends too fast.
Found a few typos. I'll list them so you can get to them.
Run her like you own her!
Fairly certain you meant "ruin" here.
feeling the air with shrieks
"Filling the air"
squealing wail as her orgasm in
That last word should be changed.
it, Just
Comma to period. I make these often myself.
Ah. well, i don't see
Missed some capitalization here.
Good chapter. Looking forward to more.
Reminds me: Which season?
9835082??
9835131Season.
9835192oh, not really going by seasons for this.
Nice. So who's next?
This was a cute and spicy chapter I loved that Dash turned out to be a sub.
Ahh yes. Mare purring
Why Rainbow, ah never thought you would be a passionate one.
It is nothing wrong to have a kinky side, darling.
Y-you can join me next time... if you don't mind, that is.
Nice
It seems spike has found the sub of the group.
I'll take it as fluttershy would be the dom one
Still loving it! Sexy Dashie is a win!
If Dashie is the sub. Then it is very likely that Fluttershy is the dom of the group
feeling the air with shrieks - filling the air
he let out a squealing wail as her orgasm in, -orgasm hit
Welp, that was pretty damn hot. Love how Dash handles her transformation.
Awesome (as usual)
Man it always ends too fast.
Found a few typos. I'll list them so you can get to them.
Fairly certain you meant "ruin" here.
"Filling the air"
That last word should be changed.
Comma to period. I make these often myself.
Missed some capitalization here.
Good chapter. Looking forward to more.
Reminds me: Which season?
9835082
??
9835131
Season.
9835192
oh, not really going by seasons for this.
Nice. So who's next?
This was a cute and spicy chapter I loved that Dash turned out to be a sub.