Twilight and her five friends decide to spend a night together in her house in a sleep over and of course the book worm naturally pulls out her sleep over book to make sure it turns out to be the second best sleep over ever!
lol you got to admire pinkies no shits given response to the question. tho she does seem a bit more reluctant to give as many details as flutters did hehehe.
“You're 1A.)up Rarity.” Twilight said 2A.)simple as she wiped tears from her eyes due to laughing so hard.
The white mare 2B.)simple placed a hoof on her chin as she looked about the room at each of her friends until she stopped at Applejack. “Truth 3.)of 1B.)4.)Dare Applejack?” She asked 1C.)simply though a mischievous attitude could be heard in the tone of her voice.
“Ah'll take a 1D.)dare thank ya kindly.” Applejack replied quickly.
1ABCD.) There should be commas between "up" and "Rarity," "dare" and "Applejack," "simply" and "though," and between "dare" and "thank." 2AB.) "Simple" should be "simply." 3.) "Of" should be "or." 4.) The d in "dare" should be lowercase.
“I dare you to walk around the room and say; Who's a silly pony? Over and over for three minutes in the most ridiculous manner you can possibly speak in.” She replied her smirk not leaving her face.
'Who's a silly pony' should be in single quotes, and there should be a comma between "replied" and "she."
Applejack's face flushed and burned as she continued to prance around the room saying this earninggiggles and even laughs from her friends.
There should be commas between "this" and "earning," "giggles" and "and," and between "laughs" and "from."
Three minutes came and went but not quickly enough for Applejack whom plopped on her sleeping bag and glared at the unicorn with a vengeful grin on her face. “So that's how y'all wanna play it huh?
There should be commas between "went" and "but," "Applejack" and "whom," and between "it" and "huh."
“Truth or dare R-D?”
There should be a comma between "dare" and "R-D."
“I poured apple cider all over myself and flew around town screaming, 1.)I'm wet and horny, somepony come dry me off with their tongue!” She 2A.)finished and literally pulled a Fluttershy as she hid her face behind her hooves blushing beat red.
“Oh, I remember 2B.)that but I didn't know it was Rainbow Dash.” Twilight remarked 3.)up as everypony in the room laughed loudly.
“Don't take it 2C.)personal R-D, it's all apart of the game.”
1.) 'I'm wet and horny, somepony come dry me off with their tongue!' should be inside single quotation marks. 2ABC.) There should be commas between "finished" and "and," "that" and "but," and between "personal" and "R-D." 3.) "Up" is superfluous.
"...Now to make one of you spill your deepest and darkest secrets or make ya do something really funny!”
There should be a comma between "secrets" and "or."
Her gaze soon stopped at Twilight whom gulped softly.
There should be a comma between "Twilight" and "whom."
“I honestly, can't decide.” Twilight admitted with a slight blush.
“Well choose already!
The comma between "honestly" and "can't" is superfluous, and there should be a comma between "well" and "choose."
“Okay, Okay! Uh, Truth!” She replied though she regretting saying those words immediately as Rainbow Dash grinned at her.
The t in "truth" should be lowercase, and there should be a comma between "replied" and "though."
“1.) 2A.) 3.)Stallion's of course.” Twilight 2B.)replied feeling relief wash over her.
1.) "Stallions" does not need an apostrophe. 2AB.) There should be commas between "stallions" and "of," and between "replied" and "feeling." 3.) Head canon NOT accepted.
“Wow, I had ya pinned for a lesbian Twilight. Not like I'd have any problem if you were but I've never seen you dating any around Ponyville.”
There should be commas between "lesbian" and "Twilight," and between "were" and "but." Also, everypony loves a lesbian.
“Well it looks like it's Twilight's turn now. Go ahead darling.”
There should be comas between "well" and "it," and between "ahead" and "darling."
“Truth or dare Fluttershy?” Twilight asked suddenly which caused the yellow Pegasus to give a startled squeak. “Unless you want to wait a little longer.” she added quickly as she took note of Fluttershy's apprehensive expression.
There should be commas between "dare" and "Fluttershy," and between "suddenly" and "which." Also, "she" should be capitalized.
Fluttershy's nervousness seemed to melt away upon hearing this as she cleared her throat and make a surprisingly accurate clucking sound.
“Well buck me an apple tree, that was really good Fluttershy.”
"Make" should be "made," and there should be a comma between "good" and "Fluttershy."
“Your turn Fluttershy.”
There should be a comma between "turn" and "Fluttershy."
Upon hearing this Fluttershy's face became incredibly wicked looking as she looked directly at Pinkie Pie. She had been waiting for this moment. “Truth or Dare Pinkie Pie?” she asked in a snooty tone that reminded the pink mare of how she behaved while discorded.
There should be commas between "this" and "Fluttershy," and between "dare" and "Pinkie." Also, the d in "dare" should be lowercase.
“1.)No, No. that's not nearly good enough.” She said aloud seemingly to herself. “What about...” 2.)she said 3.)aloud only for her voice to go into a hushed whisper.
1.) The second "no" should not be capitalized. The period should be a comma, or "that's" should be capitalized. 2.) "She" should be capitalized. 3.) There should be a comma between "aloud" and "only."
“Very 1A.)funny Rarity.” Twilight remarked with a smirk at the white 1B.)mare whom blinked at her 2.)on confusion.
“Why, whatever are you talking 1C.)about darling?” Rarity asked innocently.
1ABC.) There should be commas between "funny" and "Rarity," "mare" and "whom," and between "about" and "darling." 2.) "On" should be "in."
“Oh, It. Is. On!”
Either the comma should be a period, or the i should be lowercase.
Fluttershy suddenly blurted out at which point Rarity and Twilight both stared at Fluttershy due to her sudden outburst as popcorn kernels comically bounced off their respective noses and fell to the floor.
There should be a comma between "out" and "at."
“How do you manage to keep staying with the cakes even though you haven't paid them a single bit towards rent?”
"Cakes" should be capitalized.
“I buck Mr. 1A.)Cake of course!” Pinkie Pie replied in a fashion as if this wasn't an issue. “But how did you know that I-” 2.)she began to 1B.)ask only for her apple cider bottle lid to mysteriously pop off and hit her square in the 1C.)nose cutting her off.
1ABC.) There should be commas between "Cake" and "of," "ask" and "only," and between "nose" and "cutting." 2.) "She" should be capitalized.
“How can you say that when Mr. Cake is married to Ms. Cake!?”
"Ms." should be "Mrs."
“Oh silly me. I forgot to mention that 1.)Ms. Cake said it was okay since 2.)she often out-of-town managing their business. You really didn't think that Ponyville was the only town with a 3.) 4.)surgarcube 5A.)cornerdid ya?” She 5B.)replied once again speaking as if there wasn't any problem at all.
1.) "Ms." should be "Mrs." 2.) "She" should be "she's" or "she is." 3.) "Surgarcube" is spelled "Sugar Cube." 4.) "Sugar Cube Corner" should be capitalized. 5AB.) There should be commas between "Corner" and "did," and between "replied" and "once."
"...I mean, they have two foals for pony's sake!” Twilight blurted out looking completely flabbergasted at this new set of information.
There should be commas between "foals" and "for" and between "out" and "looking."
Rainbow Dash remarked with a shocked yet mildly disgusted look at the pink mare who had dodged the bullet by stuffing her mouth until she had finished.
There should be a comma between "shocked" and "yet."
Pinkie Pie frantically looked about but she had gone through her bowl of popcorn already as well as Rainbow Dash and Applejack's. She had no choice but to let the others hear what she had managed to prevent them from hearing ten minutes before as her mouth moved once again without her telling it to...
There should be commas between "about" and "but," "already" and "as," and between "before" and "as."
Oh man I can't wait to hear this! And Come OUT FROM YOUR HIDEY HOLE DISCORD!!! Probably crammed up Fluttershy's ho ha :)
Great story, other than a few words missing and some bad grammar ;3
I must thank the physical limitations of my own face, because I think my smile would become so big it would implode.
Also, who's a silly pony?
lol you got to admire pinkies no shits given response to the question. tho she does seem a bit more reluctant to give as many details as flutters did hehehe.
MOAR!!!!!
this silly pony wants MOAR!!!!!
this is too awesome to wait for :)
WARNING! MAJOR CHAPTER FOUR SPOILERS!
Wow, first line.
1ABCD.) There should be commas between "up" and "Rarity," "dare" and "Applejack," "simply" and "though," and between "dare" and "thank."
2AB.) "Simple" should be "simply."
3.) "Of" should be "or."
4.) The d in "dare" should be lowercase.
'Who's a silly pony' should be in single quotes, and there should be a comma between "replied" and "she."
There should be commas between "this" and "earning," "giggles" and "and," and between "laughs" and "from."
There should be commas between "went" and "but," "Applejack" and "whom," and between "it" and "huh."
There should be a comma between "dare" and "R-D."
1.) 'I'm wet and horny, somepony come dry me off with their tongue!' should be inside single quotation marks.
2ABC.) There should be commas between "finished" and "and," "that" and "but," and between "personal" and "R-D."
3.) "Up" is superfluous.
There should be a comma between "secrets" and "or."
There should be a comma between "Twilight" and "whom."
The comma between "honestly" and "can't" is superfluous, and there should be a comma between "well" and "choose."
The t in "truth" should be lowercase, and there should be a comma between "replied" and "though."
1.) "Stallions" does not need an apostrophe.
2AB.) There should be commas between "stallions" and "of," and between "replied" and "feeling."
3.) Head canon NOT accepted.
There should be commas between "lesbian" and "Twilight," and between "were" and "but." Also, everypony loves a lesbian.
There should be comas between "well" and "it," and between "ahead" and "darling."
There should be commas between "dare" and "Fluttershy," and between "suddenly" and "which." Also, "she" should be capitalized.
"Make" should be "made," and there should be a comma between "good" and "Fluttershy."
There should be a comma between "turn" and "Fluttershy."
There should be commas between "this" and "Fluttershy," and between "dare" and "Pinkie." Also, the d in "dare" should be lowercase.
1.) The second "no" should not be capitalized. The period should be a comma, or "that's" should be capitalized.
2.) "She" should be capitalized.
3.) There should be a comma between "aloud" and "only."
1ABC.) There should be commas between "funny" and "Rarity," "mare" and "whom," and between "about" and "darling."
2.) "On" should be "in."
Either the comma should be a period, or the i should be lowercase.
There should be a comma between "out" and "at."
"Cakes" should be capitalized.
1ABC.) There should be commas between "Cake" and "of," "ask" and "only," and between "nose" and "cutting."
2.) "She" should be capitalized.
"Ms." should be "Mrs."
1.) "Ms." should be "Mrs."
2.) "She" should be "she's" or "she is."
3.) "Surgarcube" is spelled "Sugar Cube."
4.) "Sugar Cube Corner" should be capitalized.
5AB.) There should be commas between "Corner" and "did," and between "replied" and "once."
There should be commas between "foals" and "for" and between "out" and "looking."
There should be a comma between "shocked" and "yet."
There should be commas between "about" and "but," "already" and "as," and between "before" and "as."
This was a cute little chapter.
Next chapter: Sexy Pinkie Pie time!
Pinkie giveing no shits!? I LOVE IT!
WANT MORE!
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So I wasn't the only one thinking that.
Yay! Ooh! This is really getting good! Can't wait!!!!
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Still one of my all time favorite Anthology clips.
Kinda surprised how clever Pinkie was to mumble herself using popcorn.
Not that it saved her in the end, but still, quick thinking on that one.
Say what you want about Pinkie Pie, but damn, she sure knows how to cheat.
Zing!
cream her pie....jeebus