Twilight and her five friends decide to spend a night together in her house in a sleep over and of course the book worm naturally pulls out her sleep over book to make sure it turns out to be the second best sleep over ever!
Well, the clop in this part was certainly exciting. I should however point out how unnecessary it was. If Fluttershy is pregnant, that will become clear in the coming weeks. Also, as it is also clear that Fluttershy hasn't slept with any other stallions, then if she is pregnant it is Discords. So really, what was the point of this? Also, if she really wanted a sample, why couldn't Discord have sex with Fluttershy while wearing a condom then give Twilight the condom, problem solved. I mean I liked how things went but I don't feel that Twilight has enough motivation to get into this in the first place.
I'm glad that this isn't going the cliche AppleDash route. Nice to see that they're repairing their friendship and who knows, maybe Rainbow Dash knows someone that she can set Applejack up with.
I'm not sure if you noticed but Discord and Fluttershy decided that they wanted to have a threesome with Twilight at a certain point which made sure the characters pointed out when this was.
So from that point on, The two set down to tricking the Alicorn into having a threesome with them.
Also, based on how I have portrayed Fluttershy in this chapter and last chapter, do you REALLY THINK she would allow Discord to wear a condom?
She's been TRYING to get pregnant with Discord's foals, why in Equestria would she allow him to wear something that might prevent this?
Now in regards to Twilight not having a good reason as you say:
This is Twilight Sparkle we're talking about here, when she wants to study something or sets her mind on something, NOTHING(short of Celestia intervening) will stop that mare from doing it.
We've seen this countless times in episodes, the mare jumps in head first without panning out the details and ends up looking silly later when if she had done the obvious, she could have avoided her embarrassment.
Now in regards to finding out if Fluttershy is pregnant with Discord's foal or not:
The god of chaos and disharmony having offspring...
I don't know about you but if i heard this was happening in my neighborhood PLUS one of my best friends being the mother of said child of the god of chaos, YOUR DAMN RIGHT I'D WANT TO KNOW AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.
With this thought in mind once I had pictured myself in Twilight's position, I knew exactly how far she'd be willing to go in order to find out as quickly as possible. The fact that Discord and Fluttershy lured her into having a threesome based around this idea was just more fuel for the fire.:P
And in the end, Fluttershy and Discord found a playmate they knew would be happy to join in with them just about anytime.
so does this stil count as an apple dash clopfic since they did buck each other more or less in the sense of the word lol. but seriously I like how they are keeping there bond strong, fighting may not be the answer but sometimes it does help squash any negative feelings between good friends.
as for flutters and discord heh wow very clever pony's indeed. I would of never thought they had planned any of this granted perhaps spur of the moment but still planned. also it never was mentioned (tho I am sure implied) just what kinda cock discord normally has? going off him turning into shiny and bucking twi I'd assume equine which is disappointing because being the master of chaos i always figured it be a bottle rocket or an actual rooster lol.
oh and that last bit, I know it's not on her flanks but I still pictured the CMC running up to twi like " OH MY GOSH twi you got a second cuti....e.. property of fluttershy? what kinda cutie mark is that?"
In some ways. Discord has corrupted the innocent little mare Fluttershy once was and in others, Fluttershy has tamed Discord so that he doesn't turn Ponyville upside down more or less.
4693366 possibly tho I like to think of it as more he's liberated her from her holding back on her inner feelings. heck if it bothers anyone too much she could always blame it on discord and no one would think otherwise.
Tell you what, if that would ever happen in canon there would be no bucking way Tirek would convince Discord even if he offered him hundreds of worlds.
4692772 Okay yeah, I see what you're saying, except one thing. Why wouldn't Fluttershy let him wear a condom, she's already pregnant with his foal, so what does that matter. Of course she may not allow it because she hates the feel of condoms, or she like to feels when Discord unloads. Also, we have no clue whether they have the technology for condoms, so yeah forget the condom thing.
One question though, Twilight said she wasn't into mares? Has she changed her mind about that now? Or is she just going to be uncomfortable every time she joins them? Perhaps she's bisexual and didn't realize it until now?
4697174 Yeah, that's what I figured. It also seems she okay with being pleasured by another mare as well. Still must feel a bit weird for poor Twilight.
haha, I wouldn't say she's okay with it but lets see you teetering on the edge of orgasm only for the guy to be unable to finish you off and suddenly when you least expect it, someone rushes up and suddenly pushes you over the edge before you can even get a proper thought in your head.
Excellently written story, Love the frequent updates. Oh and btw the emoticon in the authors note is broken.
Well, the clop in this part was certainly exciting. I should however point out how unnecessary it was. If Fluttershy is pregnant, that will become clear in the coming weeks. Also, as it is also clear that Fluttershy hasn't slept with any other stallions, then if she is pregnant it is Discords. So really, what was the point of this? Also, if she really wanted a sample, why couldn't Discord have sex with Fluttershy while wearing a condom then give Twilight the condom, problem solved. I mean I liked how things went but I don't feel that Twilight has enough motivation to get into this in the first place.
I'm glad that this isn't going the cliche AppleDash route. Nice to see that they're repairing their friendship and who knows, maybe Rainbow Dash knows someone that she can set Applejack up with.
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Maybe the author fixed it in the last two hours, but the emoticon looks fine to me.
4692481 Yeah, He fixed it.
Such a cute cover pic, though Twi looks a bit like a ponified Ralts, but in a good way!
Five quatloos says Discord was recording the entire thing.
Comedy Clop....
FIRST TIME FOR EVERYTHING!
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What's a quatloo? And I bet he did too. In multiple angles for Fluttershy's enjoyment.
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I'm not sure if you noticed but Discord and Fluttershy decided that they wanted to have a threesome with Twilight at a certain point which made sure the characters pointed out when this was.
So from that point on, The two set down to tricking the Alicorn into having a threesome with them.
Also, based on how I have portrayed Fluttershy in this chapter and last chapter, do you REALLY THINK she would allow Discord to wear a condom?
She's been TRYING to get pregnant with Discord's foals, why in Equestria would she allow him to wear something that might prevent this?
Now in regards to Twilight not having a good reason as you say:
This is Twilight Sparkle we're talking about here, when she wants to study something or sets her mind on something, NOTHING(short of Celestia intervening) will stop that mare from doing it.
We've seen this countless times in episodes, the mare jumps in head first without panning out the details and ends up looking silly later when if she had done the obvious, she could have avoided her embarrassment.
Now in regards to finding out if Fluttershy is pregnant with Discord's foal or not:
The god of chaos and disharmony having offspring...
I don't know about you but if i heard this was happening in my neighborhood PLUS one of my best friends being the mother of said child of the god of chaos, YOUR DAMN RIGHT I'D WANT TO KNOW AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.
With this thought in mind once I had pictured myself in Twilight's position, I knew exactly how far she'd be willing to go in order to find out as quickly as possible. The fact that Discord and Fluttershy lured her into having a threesome based around this idea was just more fuel for the fire.:P
And in the end, Fluttershy and Discord found a playmate they knew would be happy to join in with them just about anytime.
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Star Trek, The Gamemasters of Triskelion. The Quatloo was the form of currency used for betting. It's become minor Internet slang.
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Sweet, thanks . So I'll throw my 5 Quatloos into the pot.
Discord and Fluttershy Win
FRIENDSHIP
Wait, FRIENDSHIP?
so does this stil count as an apple dash clopfic since they did buck each other more or less in the sense of the word lol. but seriously I like how they are keeping there bond strong, fighting may not be the answer but sometimes it does help squash any negative feelings between good friends.
as for flutters and discord heh wow very clever pony's indeed. I would of never thought they had planned any of this granted perhaps spur of the moment but still planned. also it never was mentioned (tho I am sure implied) just what kinda cock discord normally has? going off him turning into shiny and bucking twi I'd assume equine which is disappointing because being the master of chaos i always figured it be a bottle rocket or an actual rooster lol.
oh and that last bit, I know it's not on her flanks but I still pictured the CMC running up to twi like " OH MY GOSH twi you got a second cuti....e.. property of fluttershy? what kinda cutie mark is that?"
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In some ways. Discord has corrupted the innocent little mare Fluttershy once was and in others, Fluttershy has tamed Discord so that he doesn't turn Ponyville upside down more or less.
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possibly tho I like to think of it as more he's liberated her from her holding back on her inner feelings. heck if it bothers anyone too much she could always blame it on discord and no one would think otherwise.
Fluttercord?
I give it an A
FlutterCordLight?
A+
Tell you what, if that would ever happen in canon there would be no bucking way Tirek would convince Discord even if he offered him hundreds of worlds.
Why do I get the sneaking, sickening suspicion that Fluttershy's tongue may lead to complications for Twilight?
property of fluttershy thats so funny
4692772 Okay yeah, I see what you're saying, except one thing. Why wouldn't Fluttershy let him wear a condom, she's already pregnant with his foal, so what does that matter. Of course she may not allow it because she hates the feel of condoms, or she like to feels when Discord unloads. Also, we have no clue whether they have the technology for condoms, so yeah forget the condom thing.
One question though, Twilight said she wasn't into mares? Has she changed her mind about that now? Or is she just going to be uncomfortable every time she joins them? Perhaps she's bisexual and didn't realize it until now?
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Think of it this way, Did you know some women in porn movies aren't actually attracted their same gender despite having lesbian sex on screen?
It's kinda like that for Twilight.
She's not into mares but she's willing to pleasure one if convinced enough to do so or if she feels comfortable doing so.
4697174 Yeah, that's what I figured. It also seems she okay with being pleasured by another mare as well. Still must feel a bit weird for poor Twilight.
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haha, I wouldn't say she's okay with it but lets see you teetering on the edge of orgasm only for the guy to be unable to finish you off and suddenly when you least expect it, someone rushes up and suddenly pushes you over the edge before you can even get a proper thought in your head.
4697229 Hehe, yeah, I hope she learns to really enjoy it. Probably won't though.
PROPERTY OF FLUTTERSHY
10 hearts out of celestia, good chapter!
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Ahahaha, that ending. Waaah, that almost killed me. Death by chair fall would be silly.
PROPERTY OF FLUTTERSHY
Had me choking on my tea while laughing ... I'm still giggling a bit. ^^