Well, until next chapter then.

I'm just happy there is more to read yay

Your tablet is trying to tell you something.

3695196 I can tell. unfortunately, I am not familiar with my tablet's strange language.

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I hope to see a tsundere Sattin and a snarky Caleb

Try copy and paste on the name or tell the tablet that is a new word in the dictionary. :)

3695442 I could do that... or I could just rename her Satan

3695481 Daddies Little Devil

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Yes! This!

Very awesome can't wait for more chapters :D

Well this is gonna be spectacularly bad. Gotta love bratty batty teenager mares!

Well this is exceedingly refreshing. I've said it once and I'll say it again, I love me some batponies, and they seem to be in criminally short supply. This story slakes a thirst that oftentimes goes so long un-quenched I forget its even there, and I love it for it. The batponies themselves are presented in a bold new way, with a society I'd love to explore, giving them a distinct characteristic all their own and really setting them apart from the average, common pony fodder, and when you've read as much as I have, seeing something original that stands out like that is nothing less then a godsend. I can't wait for more, and eagerly await to see where this goes.

~Signed, InfiniteBrony

Good going. This was an intriguing update.

So he's as dangerous as a Non-Lambent beserker,But he's passive unless provoked......That is a very,VERY good thing for his allies,and a very VERY bad thing for anything stupid enough to provoke him

It is refreshing to read story that do not take the basic HIE plot where the protagonist ends up to Everfree Forest and is found by mane six. You have really interesting story going on here but I hope that even if Caleb know martial arts please don't make him somekind of superhero with ability to take dozens of monsters/enemies down. Stories with desperate battles are a lot more interesting to read than the ones
where protagonist completely kicks everyones ass.

That said until next time and please have upvote!

Good read. Looking forward to more.

3700728 that thar is a confused man one of the most danger's things on the planet one snap of the nerves and im dead....... ima poke im with a stick.......AAAAAARRRRRGGGGGG.. HES ANGREY

3808466 RIP Steve Irwin.

3832800 You know, he wouldn't have to RIP if he hadn't RIPped his fuckin chest cavity apart. Just sayin...

3842591 Crikey!

slapcaption.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/01/Now-you-have-my-attention..jpg this story sounds like it will be good, faved

I love this story lol

very cool moar plez

When is chapter 3 due?

...Faving.

Chapter 3?
Please?

So... Your friend with the story... Can we haz link?

5539777 You'll have to ask LunarModule since he's the one writing it right now and is the one with the link.

5560329 You know what would make your fans really happy? Going to this guy, getting the link, and posting it in the description. Good idea, no?

Alright, on to the next chapt- oh wait. There hasn't been one for over a year

So this story is permanently dead now? Damn.

So our human OC goes with her? Doesn't even give any internal monologue about the fact that she could be leading him into a trap or some other shit that could kill him? Or the fact that he doesn't know her?

Nope. I'm stopping here. Good bye.

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Actually no, I'll be taking over

7119452 Oh? If so then when will the story receive an update? Been waiting three years and my patience -does- have some limits.

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Of course, of course it won't be long from now, let's say two weeks from now.

6873692 Thank you for your input!

Update plz

7193681 Please don't pressure me, I might have to kill you and I'm against violence

7207639 I was more wondering on a possible update time frame. Sorry that it came out like a demand.

7207797 no it's fine, I'm not angry. There's a lot going on in my life right now so it's just difficult to find free time. Rest assured, I can get it done

7234467 Make your threats. I need something to make me laugh. In the meantime, please update.

Am I to assume that this story is no longer with us (dead)?

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Read the description, it says what happened. Though I wish he would have given us more information. Like who said friend is so we can read the rest of this story.

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Was this change in authors recent?

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I have no idea