The Weathermare

Rainbow Dash is getting a promotion! But that promotion turns out the be something she never thought of doing in a million years.

Based on this comic

Thanks to Jmaster for proofreading this.

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Seether00

Seether00 #1 · Dec 17th, 2013 · · ·

The moral of the story: Never look a gift horse in the mouth.

SpitFlame

SpitFlame #2 · Dec 18th, 2013 · · ·

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moral of story: don't be greedy

MarkTheWolfpony

MarkTheWolfpony #3 · Dec 21st, 2013 · · ·

You know she should of ask what the promotion is before rejecting it. But with Derpy, she can get anything.

SirTruffles

SirTruffles #4 · Jan 10th, 2014 · · ·

Holy rogue tense errors, Batman!

“Hello, Equestria to Derpy!” Rainbow waves her hoof in front of Derpy’s eyes and gets no response. Rainbow shakes her head at the strange pegasi. It’s a wonder she ever got a job as a mailmare in the first place.
“Right… see you later, Derpy.” Rainbow turns and flies in the direction of Cloudsdale, leaving a rainbow wake behind her. Her mind is still trying to figure out how somepony could make a mistake as big as this.

Pretty sure these should be past tense to fit with the rest of the story. Other than that, well done. Have a thumb.

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