Equidae

One day, as Lyra and Bon Bon played together in the wintery snow, a tragic accident takes place, forcing Lyra into the unknown. Now, neck-deep in this unsettling situation, the mare must make a choice. One that will permanently change her life.

[Cover image by jcharlesmachiavelli]

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Sorren

Sorren #1 · Mar 16th, 2012 · · · Story ·

This is a very good story. Great writing sytle. Sentance fluency is through the roof. All in all a very good piece. But thats only looking at the writing. The story in itself earns another credit. I like your style. Have a like.

Sorren

Sorren #2 · Mar 16th, 2012 · · · Author's Notes ·

Oh my goodness a smart pony. You deserve many internets.
Here, just pretend every card is an internet point.

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Salnax

Salnax #3 · Mar 16th, 2012 · · · Story ·

So a stupid little parody like "Council of Celestias" gets featured, but this doesn't? What the hell FIMFiction?

Salnax

Salnax #4 · Mar 16th, 2012 · · · Author's Notes ·

Shouldn't you add the Human tag?

Lucefudu

Lucefudu #5 · Mar 16th, 2012 · · · Author's Notes ·

329264 Oops! Thanks for the reminder.
And for the record, I enjoyed your story. Don't be hard on yourself (either that or my sarcasm detector is off )