Iatrogenesisist extraordinaire!
Although White Noise loves Octavia deeply, but the mare just can't bear the boredom that invaded her life any longer. One day, she decides to invite he friends over to celebrate the mare's good party monster times and, while Octavia makes a scene about it, White Noise feels more chained than ever. But White Noise isn't about to let the stuck-up mare's ways hinder her idea of having fun.
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A fine job, my good sir
And that ending...perfect. Quite the story
Almost a Gift of the Magi, and I loved that story. Excellent work. I love TaviScratch, especially good, robust dramatic pieces. Good work.
I like how you tell us how vinyl got her specks and why she has them.
"All of which makes me anxious... at times unbearably so."
Fixed that for ya, love. Nice story, hopefully Vinyl keeps her promise!
Awesome story, plus you write very well. Will be looking at the rest of your stories. This one needs lots more thumbs up then it has.
I've always liked the idea of Octavia and Vinyl being friends or knowing each other well. It just seems appropriate somehow. lol
Good story! I enjoyed my perusal! There are multiple mistakes in grammar and spelling which bugged me, mostly because they would occasionally pull me out of the story to puzzle over an awkward construction. Elsewise, very enjoyable!
349830 Yeah... this wasn't one of my best works. I was going to revise it, but seeing that it isn't popular nor a story which I care much, I shrug.
Seemed just a bit rushed and with vinyl just coming back was a bit of a none climax. But hey good story.
so sad
wonderful story got my heart aching there for a bit..
this goes with the whole story from tavi's side perfectly
i think this goes better with the ending
Interesting idea for Vinyl to be on drugs...
Linkin park inspired?!
This story just got 20% cooler!
I'm impressed.
I really really liked this story, sad but not too sad.
Favorited and thumbed up!